Komaki / Comments

I know, I'm the action-y type person too. I'm not one for the gazillion love stories on here, but I love a good touching story. I try and get as much emotion as I can into my own stories, but of course, any chance I get for my character to kick some butt is good by me. Figuring out the secrets of life, starting a revolution, and some mega action scenes?? Count me in!

Haha! Well, that story kinda got throne off a cliff, and I haven't thought much about writing one for her to star in since. I'm realizing how hard it would to be published, much less get a movie deal. And demand my friend stars in it. Hey, at this point, if I even finish a story I'll be happy.

Okay, Ash, I will buy you a cushion and a massage chair if it means you will sit long enough to write more stories. Those two over there -pokes left- are beautiful. Simply amazing. I would love to shed a few more tears if it meant reading another of your stories.

I'm glad you liked it! I've been considering giving up poetry. /:

The questions are no problem, I'm a bored person.

Hmmm... Well, I was always that kid playing "pretend" out on the playground with my friends. I'd make up stories on the trampoline, or before going to sleep, etc. I guess, at some point, I just decided I wanted to share my stories. I'm not sure why I started writing writing.. I roleplayed for a while, so that might have been part of it. I do have to thank one of my best friend's for this passion though. She wanted/wants to be an actress, so I decided I should write a book, and then she could star in it when it became a movie. Naive, I know. After that, it was just my passion. I love to write.

I hope that makes some sense!

Thanks for the poem comment. [:

No problem! n.n
I'm Maeee, and I'm glad you wrote it! n.n

I liked Forgotten Strength. [:

Uhmmm.... About two years. Unless you count the story about my cat I wrote in third grade...Which I wouldn't.

I'm doing good. I hope u can read my story

YAYA!! KOMAKI KUN!!!!!!!!!!!

I've written little things in first person, like English assignments, but nothing like a story. All my previous ideas just didn't work in first person. So honestly, I've written in first person, but this is totally new. Thanks for the comment!

For the record, I reviewed the chapter, and noted the awkward spots. This started out as an English project, so I think where I tried to blend it together got a little choppy... Thanks again.

Thanks for the story comment! And especially for the criticism, I'll watch out for those weak verbs. Thanks again for reading!

quite good thank you for asking.
my strongest subject is english so it's a habit when i nit-pick at people

i'm mostly a writer and not a reader unless somebody asks me to read their story and give advice
:/ probably the advice i give to most is their grammar and punctuation
so how are you?

Welcomee

Welcome to Mibba. I'm Natalie. Hope you like it here. [:

hello.

Welcome to mibba! :]