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Thank you for the lovely comment on my story! This story really means a lot to me even though it's just starting out so thank you for sharing your opinions!

Thanks for your comment :) And a lot of people think I'm going to fast in my story, but I think of it as writing a story, not a book. But thanks for the opinion! All opinions are welcomed! The more, the better :D

Thanks for your cooment :) I think it was hard for me to figure out where the story was going at the point, and I still am, so I'm probably jumping around alot - sorry.

thank you for the comment and yeah I know I try to edit many times and it seems each time there are new mistakes, only some on purpose haha
and it is more like Chloe is more in tune with how her father treated her and made her feel rather than the fact that he's not there like the perfect image in her head that isn't actually there and she's just focused on how her mother failed her and ruined the family rather than her dad leaving because she feels the same way and would love to leave too but she''ll soon realize how she has been blinded by her fathers faults and such
thank you for commenting <3

I can't belive you aren't all over Mibba already. Honestly, what is it about you and your stories that makes them so good? It's only been a few days and I'm already through all of your stories - subscribed and recommended of course - and can't help but want to read more. I know I haven't commented on them - which is unfair since you definitely deserve many comments - but I will do that, I promise.
In my defence: I just couldn't stop reading for even a second, even if that meant neglecting the comments for now.

All I wanted to say before I started babbling away: You are an amazing writer - and I absolutely love your writing style.
I also hope you continue those stories of yours that you seemingly haven't updated for a while - because seriously, every single one is more than just great.

Thanks for your comment I quickly glanced over some of the parts you mentioned that were inconsistent and added/took away some information. To make the timeline of events flow a little more smoother without the choppiness.

No problem: ) I hope you update soon though .

Thanks a ton for your comment!
I fixed the colon issues.
I don't know why I put those in, in the first place..
:)

Thanks for the comment on is it killing you like its killing me. The point is that the girls experience has matured them. They are very different from each other. Grace is weaker than her sister and is more emotional. While Jessica has been toughened by the experience and by her friends, who you will meet in Chapter two which is written by me. haha

Hey. Thanks for the comment. I agree, the kissing thing is a tad random. I'll edit that out. Thanks for telling me my sentences could be shorter. This was just a first draft and I wasn't sure if I could come up with something better. But thanks for getting back to me :)

Hi, thanks for your comment! I actually agree with you, and I've been thinking of maybe taking the first 2 chapters out, because I don't really think they would throw off the rest of the story too much. I'll also do some more editing. Thanks again!

the reason ava said sorry at the end of In You I Taste God is because it shows that in the end, in death, that she really did love him and regardless of his obsession and overseeing of her own personal demons she wanted to stay.

Hey thanks so much for the comment on Forgive Me, I am glad you liked it :D your comment was appreciated greatly :D

Please continue Baby on Board!!!!!I love it!

Hey! I was drawn to your story Baby on Board, then I clicked on your profile and saw that we were the same age and both starting out in college. Alright, now I'm going to go one and read your story. I'm pregnant too just like the character! :) So perhaps I'll be able to relate.

hey! I'm loving your Baby on Board story so far. :) You're a very talented writer.