Dying Snow Princess / Comments

Thanks for the comment on Guilt, it means a lot. c:

xoxo, Saleigh

Thank you so much for the comment I appreciate it, and also thanks or the advice! I will def try to work on it!

If I put more detail it'll be useless, for this new chapter most of it is black:

Black Sky
Black Clothes
Black Toys
Black Dreams
Black and White Flashback
etc...

That's great, but I wish that I could finish mine faster, I made it so short and I wish it could be longer.

Cool, I would love to see that, it is awesome, and I can't wait for you to use it, and also, I would love to see her descent.......

Cool, I can't wait. (She ain't human? What is she...demon?)

I can't wait to see her descent, I'm doing the same thing in my story, because it'll show about three chapters of how he was human......

Hey, thanks for the tips, I will follow em, anyway, nice job on the chapter....I dig it. What you got planned for it?

Wow, nice work on Part Three, part one of mine should be uploading as I type (slow a** internet).

You could work on the details, I'm just outlining, and even though she did, who said she doesn't have a home phone, or a pager, or something.......

When she wakes up, why doesn't she recieve a call from someone she doesn't want to talk to, and then a twist happens.....

Hey, when are you posting the next chapter, I love your writing and can't wait for more.....

Alright, lemme finish this chapter, and it'll be up tomorrow, if the net works....

"Why..." I uttered with my last breath, or was it.......

Like it? It'll be my opening line. Should I change it?

Allrighty then, I'll finish it soon.

Thanks, the first chapter is almost done, and I can't wait to put it out.

Horrible, they won't even let you yawn....it's mad.....and boring. *yawns*

Okay, but I am revamping it, and don't worry, you'll like the girl character.

Okay, just wait for it, maybe until one week, because I have really big GCSE exams in a few weeks, so I might not even go on the net......

You should write at your pace, but you should also remember to steal some time to write. When you have five hours or so you should write chapters ahead, I'm on Chapter 2 of my story, I wanna get to chapter five before I upload it....

that's what a lot say, I'm not the one who ask for feed back, you are... I just gave it to you