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  • Retrouvaille

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    Thank you so much for your comments on Shut Your Eyes! I'm so sorry about the lack of updates, but I am working on one right now for everyone that I hope will be worth the wait. Thank you again for the kind words & for all the support you've shown the story :) It really means a lot.
    February 4th, 2014 at 01:02am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    I think they were a little too shocked that they'd been found out to deny it! Hahaha. I'm glad you liked the little Zayn mention in there. I thought it would be a fun way to look at things, just a nice inside joke. :D

    So the reason I made both of them so young in the story is because, last summer, I started thinking about fan-fictions and how serious they all seemed to be. Lots of them revolve around more adult problems, especially surrounding sexual matters, and it just kind of made me sad, even though I am so incredibly guilty of all of those things in my writing. I decided that I wanted to write something that was more innocent in nature, where the characters spend most of their time chatting, maybe kissing here or there, and goofing around instead of being stressed about more mature matters. I just thought it would be a little fun. :) I hope that answers your question.

    Ah, thank you for recommending it! Of course I forgive you, since I would never expect a recommendation from anybody. But I do appreciate it! And thanks so much for your comment, as always. ^_^
    January 30th, 2014 at 10:21pm
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    Aw, yay! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting! :D
    January 25th, 2014 at 11:42pm
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    Some great points indeed! I have to agree that Sarah really shouldn't get upset about the whole situation because it doesn't affect her, but, being fourteen, she probably just needs to take some time to reach that conclusion herself. If sh even does, since she can be so emotionally immature. Hahaha.

    I'm glad my updating made you happy, and no worries! I love hearing your thoughts on the chapter. :D Thanks so much for commenting.
    January 14th, 2014 at 02:37am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    Mmm, very good theory and awesome reading! It absolutely was English, and I think you're definitely understanding the characters in a deep kind of way. So yay!

    I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and that you think the interaction was realistic. I really appreciate it. And I'll definitely be faster with the next update. I promise. Hahaha. Thanks for commenting!
    January 8th, 2014 at 03:58am
  • IronicallyConceited

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    Thanks again for another comment :) You are probably the main reason I want to finish so badly, so thanks for being my motivation! Hopefully I can find time to write with school this semester so I'm not updating 3 times a year :P
    Thank you for sticking around and always leaving me fantastically nice comments :) (Next chapter should be half Rob's POV, and then back to hers for a bit ;))
    January 5th, 2014 at 10:15am
  • Katie Mosing

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    You are so right! Hopefully they'll get it all sorted out in future chapters Wink Thank you so much for your comment!
    January 4th, 2014 at 06:42pm
  • no.one.is.home

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    You're spot on with the black and white / right and wrong thing and with the embarrassed thing, just wait for Evan to catch up with you ;) Even Ryliegh admitted Evan was wrong.
    December 19th, 2013 at 10:04am
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    Thanks so much for the comment on Transparent, I'm so glad you liked it and the detail in your comment is just to die, thank you! Love that you're paying attention to details. :*
    December 1st, 2013 at 02:07am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    YAY! Hahaha. I love when I can actually update. It's the greatest! And I'm so glad you think the awkwardness was fitting for the story. I'll try to update again soon, but lord knows if that'll work out or not. Hahaha. Thanks for commenting!
    November 27th, 2013 at 05:30am
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    @ bxgurl95
    Thnx lol
    November 25th, 2013 at 11:06pm
  • bxgurl95

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    @ CaliCupcakeMonster
    Yay and I like the new name
    November 25th, 2013 at 10:52pm
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    Im so sorry for the wait nd thank you for being a loyal follower. I will be posting some new stories soon.
    November 25th, 2013 at 10:24pm
  • IronicallyConceited

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    Thanks so much :) I'm really trying to get something done, but, yes... Life is crazy right now. I'm always planning on finishing this, so I am glad you check back occasionally :)
    November 12th, 2013 at 05:22am
  • bxgurl95

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    @ collectivision
    which stories are we talking about?
    November 8th, 2013 at 03:40am
  • collectivision

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    I took them down until such time as I can complete the god damn thing. I got irritated and started again.
    November 8th, 2013 at 03:25am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    Mmm, that's very true. Being a teenage girl can be so hard sometimes. Aw, I'm so glad you enjoy the story, and the nostalgic thing is kind of what I was going for, so I'm glad that it's being accomplished! I'll post a new chapter as soon as I can. Thanks for commenting. :D
    November 6th, 2013 at 12:27am
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    Thank you so much for your comment !
    I'm very glad you like it Mr. Green
    November 1st, 2013 at 12:07am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    Aw, yay! I'm glad you think the list of rules was realistic. I was really stuck, and then that idea popped into my head, and I was like, "THAT COULD WORK." hahaha. And YES! I'm glad you liked the Deflowering King line! Hahaha. I was hoping someone would. It really does mean a lot to me that you like my writing so much. I always appreciate it. Thanks so much for commenting!
    October 29th, 2013 at 12:11am
  • bxgurl95

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    @ zillyboo
    Lol you're the author I don't question your motives.
    October 24th, 2013 at 01:42pm