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  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    hahaha. It happens! I'm glad you found out that it came out eventually. :) And I'm glad that my endings keep you on your toes! Too much predictability is never a good thing. ^_^

    And yes, it was important to me that their lives went on, even if they did miss each other and thought about each other a lot. I wanted to show that it's perfectly okay to move on from a relationship, and if the original relationship is supposed to happen again, it will. But there's no reason to sit around waiting for someone and letting the rest of your opportunities pass by! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story and you think I did the characters justice!

    I'm sad to see it go, too. I'll definitely miss Sarah and Harry's relationship. And aw, you're too kind! I hope it doesn't disappoint. ^_^ Thanks so much for your insightful comment!
    April 3rd, 2014 at 10:07pm
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    You just made my heart soar! Hahaha. I'm so glad you thought I showed their emotions well! And yes, that's exactly it! They were both definitely trying to ignore the fact that what they thought would be a cute summer romance turned into something way stronger than they anticipated. And that's true! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and the next chapter will be up sometime this weekend! ^_^ Thanks so much for commenting!
    March 27th, 2014 at 05:01am
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    Aw, I didn't mean to make you sad! I'm sorry. And ah, I'm so glad you thought so! :D And yes, updates are always fun, although it will be another sad one, unfortunately. Hahaha. Thanks for commenting!
    March 24th, 2014 at 11:47pm
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    Thanks for you comment. That first story I mentioned is not the Crosby/Bennett one, it was another idea I already axed. I'll go back and take that ad for it down.
    March 20th, 2014 at 02:34pm
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    @ onlythegooddieyoung
    :) I'm glad
    March 20th, 2014 at 05:04am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    I'm so glad you enjoy the story so much and that you think I have a good placement of events! I try to plan out how everything will pace so the big picture doesn't look too crazy, so I'm glad you agree with the way my mind works! :D And there are still a few more chapters, so we don't need to be sad just yet! Thank you so much for your comment, as always. You always put a smile on my face.
    March 20th, 2014 at 05:02am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    Mmm, I agree with you, and I'm glad that you feel that way about their situation! And ahhh, yes. I love how much you understand Sarah's character and what she's going through. ^_^ Thanks for your comment!
    March 18th, 2014 at 11:43pm
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    Aw, I'm so glad you enjoyed Lounsbury Prep even more the second time around. :) And wow, that's, like, one of the nicest things anyone has ever said about any of my stories, that it can be read almost like poetry. I appreciate that! ^_^ Thank you so much for commenting. :D
    March 13th, 2014 at 07:30pm
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    YAYY! I'm so glad you think the progression is cute. :D And I'm glad you feel so strongly about them and their relationship. It means a lot to me. Thank you for commenting!
    March 13th, 2014 at 04:48am
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    Ah, hooray. I love when my writing isn't complaint-worthy. :D And I love hearing what you think, even though you might have said it before, and I'm so glad that you think Sarah and Harry are cute together and that you like my descriptions. It really does mean a lot to me! :D And I did enjoy my break quite a lot, thank you. I spent a lot of time relaxing and watching television. Hahaha. ^_^ Thank you so much for your comment.
    March 10th, 2014 at 11:21pm
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    Yay! I'm glad you're smiling. :D

    And yup! He was nervous he was getting too close for her comfort between him resting his head on her shoulder and then wrapping his arm around her waist. :) He just wanted to make sure he wasn't making her nervous. Thanks for commenting!
    March 6th, 2014 at 06:41am
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    Mmm, very good insight! I definitely think that their conversations calm Sarah down a bit and let her know that Harry is, really, just a regular person like her instead of some untouchable older womanizer. Not that she necessarily was conscious she was thinking that, but...ya know. Hahaha.

    I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! And yes, right on target. Good catch. :) Thanks for your comment!
    March 5th, 2014 at 05:06am
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    I'm so glad you think they're cute!

    And awww! I'm blushing! Hahaha. You're so sweet. It makes me giddy that you think I have a good attention to detail in my writing, since that's something I typically feel that I'm lacking. :D And yes, their talking is always a good thing, showing progression of their relationship and all. Thank you so much for commenting! :)
    February 28th, 2014 at 04:43am
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    What's the point of living if you can't spoil special people every now and then? ^_^ Jealousy can be a serious thing, but let's hope it just stays casual! :D And aw, I'm so glad you like that about your personality, since that was my main goal with writing Sarah's character in the first place. Thanks for commenting!
    February 23rd, 2014 at 06:56am
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    Aw, yay! I'm so glad that you appreciate their slow process toward opening up to one another. Let's see if it keeps up. ;) Thanks for your comment. ^_^
    February 21st, 2014 at 03:02am
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    Aww, thank you!! I'm so glad you liked it Arms
    February 19th, 2014 at 02:54am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    Mm, that is true. They do have a bit of a communication problem, although, they are young teenagers, so it's not exactly unheard of. :) Hahaha. And yeah, the end of the summer probably won't be very easy for either of them. Thanks for commenting! :D
    February 13th, 2014 at 06:20pm
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    @ IronicallyConceited
    I don't know if I ever responded to this comment. But I'm so happy I can offer some sort of inspiration, you know how much I love this story. You're an amazing writer and I've fallen in love with the characters and the entire storyline.
    February 6th, 2014 at 03:03am
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    Aw, yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :D And yes, I think he did, too. He was very understanding about the whole thing. Thank you for commenting!
    February 6th, 2014 at 02:58am
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    @ Retrouvaille
    Of course anytime, you know that this is one of my all time favorites. I'll always be ready for an update no matter how long it takes :)
    February 4th, 2014 at 02:36pm