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  • BeReckaNZ

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    sounds pretty good ;]
    something id read anyway
    April 19th, 2010 at 11:59pm
  • RoyalCrystal

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    Sounds like a good start to a story! I'm looking forward to reading the first chapter. :D
    April 19th, 2010 at 11:28pm
  • kayleighhjaynee

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    ok thanks ^^ xx
    April 19th, 2010 at 11:12pm
  • Krazykady

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    i like it. its really interesting.
    April 19th, 2010 at 11:11pm
  • Made Of Sugar

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    Pretty interesting; I like it! :)
    April 19th, 2010 at 11:07pm
  • swim in my skies.

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    i like it so far!
    :)
    April 19th, 2010 at 11:03pm
  • Sammehh!

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    psha! i'll read it and i'll buy it too :PPPP lol add it to my mini library!
    April 19th, 2010 at 10:53pm
  • miss fits

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    I've read it. I liked it.
    April 19th, 2010 at 10:52pm
  • kayleighhjaynee

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    thanks, i intend to write more :] ive not had many readers yet though :l, however i did make my account yesterdaaay :L
    April 19th, 2010 at 10:40pm
  • kayleighhjaynee

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    its pretty good (: i liked that you established the characters and the scene. it was easier to imagine the setting :] xx
    April 19th, 2010 at 10:23pm
  • kayleighhjaynee

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    heey, i'll read your prologue and give you some feedback, may you do the same pleaase? :3 xx
    April 19th, 2010 at 10:20pm
  • Hey Juliette!

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    its really good
    i like it :)
    April 19th, 2010 at 10:02pm
  • pales

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    done and doneeee
    i think it's really good. x]
    April 19th, 2010 at 10:00pm
  • faeeriegirl61

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    ya sure and no problem
    April 19th, 2010 at 09:51pm
  • MadHatta

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    Ok sure :)
    April 19th, 2010 at 07:33pm
  • sexandcandy

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    ok sure thing :]
    Only if you read mine.... Haha kiding. But no seriously, please?
    April 19th, 2010 at 05:42pm
  • LilmissCrissie

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    Mmmmm its good. I'm subscribing.
    April 19th, 2010 at 04:55pm
  • HellVolhardZelinsky

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    sure =]
    but you'll read my poems and comment if you like em?
    =D...i'll read it right now.....
    April 19th, 2010 at 04:49pm
  • miss.bookworm

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    Hey :) How are you? I like the 'plot' of your story alot :) I hope you keep writing, cuz I'll be reading ! It is also great that you are a 'boy' who writes ! I dont know many boys who write .. :D you're the first!
    April 19th, 2010 at 04:48pm
  • Random.

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    Well you read the first chapter of my book, too?
    April 19th, 2010 at 03:50pm