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Hey there :)
Thanks for the welcome
Yeahh I'll absolutly check you your story. I'll give it a read and give you some feedback about it :)

hi :) Yes I'll read ur story. It will be my pleasure <3

Aww thanks, and yeah course.
I'll leave you a comment.

Wow, your story is really good :) I even got a little freaked out and I'm 18 :| Keep up the good work, bro!

wow your stories really good, i think you should keep on writing it and make it scarier and scarier as it goes on! :)

aww thanks for welcoming me yeh of course i'll read your story ilike reading stories it passes time! :)

Wow... your work, its amazing... i had chills down my spine! :)

Hello :)
I Shall :)
Im Kayleigh.
How are youu?
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hey! thanks. I just read yur story. So far im really liking it. I think you should talk more about the characters like describe them more. I really like how it kept me intriged & what else.... well i just cant wait for more chapters to come out. Ill be coming back to read it. lol. the plot is pretty sweet.

I'll read yours as soon as i get chance :D

I'll read yours as long as when I post you will read mine? Do we have a deal? XD

hey!!
whats up?
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i havent talked to you in like forever!
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i dont have time right but i will when i get a chance :)
im chelsea by the way

hey! sorry i didn't check out your story. i was in the middle of beginning the first chapter and my internet screwed up. i just realized the problem lmao. i'm gonna go read it now and let you know what i think! =D

Hey,
I checked out your story...
It's actually really quite good. It's very intriguing!
One thing I would suggest is adding more detail. Even a bit more to the characters.
Other than that I love the story!
^.^

Hey, thanks!
& of course

good plot. :) if you went a bit more into detail about the main character, it would make the story ten times better! but thats me just thinking. its really good.

sure thing. :) ill be sure to give you feedback!

thanks! and i sure will. i'll read it now =D

Your story is pretty awesome!!!write please:) cant wait to find out what happens:)