Hey, that's alright(:
It's kinda hard to explain, but when i read the previous chapter, i put myself in her position, if you get me? As if i was the one watching the scene before me, and made up a little scenario of what could happen in my head, and that was that she'd be all hurt and upset etc, and he'd try to talk to her but obviously he didn't know she saw, he'd act all natural then she'd blow up on him, if that makes any sense? Haha. Sorry if it doesn't. And yeaah, i really did like the chapter, it was a shock to find out that she wasn't actually pregnant and that Raven lied to her O_o <3 x
[i]Hey that sounds kinda interesting, I personally prefer love stories from a male's perspective. I don't really know why, I just do lol. I can't wait to read it, I hope you'll sen me a link when you can :)[/i]
YAY, updates *---*
xo