May 24th, 2011 at 05:16pm
imbalance / Comments
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Yeah I figured that either she was in love with someone or she was on drugs and that was why she was acting so weird. If I figured that out myself so I think you made it pretty obvious without saying anything! Yeah I like your story writing. Some of your first stories couold've used a little extra work but I watched as you got better and better going along.May 23rd, 2011 at 03:37pm
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I've been going through all your stories slowly one at a time :3 You have a lot of them! I particularly liked the story about the skater girl and her little sister. That made me cry at three different points. One thing that I've been wondering though is what happened to their mom that made her go all psycho? I was thinking drugs but I'd say you would know better than me seeing as you wrote the story...May 22nd, 2011 at 12:28pm
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I thought it was different yeah, but in the situation that the main character is in she seems like the type to change her style depending on her mood and situation. So I thought it worked well :3May 21st, 2011 at 11:08am
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I like ya profile :D
And yeah the name is better, or so i think.May 18th, 2011 at 01:13pm -
No problemo :)May 18th, 2011 at 09:34am
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Ah, but I'm a usual cause I love you and your story ;)May 17th, 2011 at 06:14pm
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LOL I'm like a regular at this point :L Like someone that goes into the same cafe every day and knows all the people there xDMay 16th, 2011 at 06:36pm
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No problem! If someone is writing a good story I think they deserve recognition and feedback as well as encouragment so I just thought I shouldn't be a silent reader :3May 14th, 2011 at 02:46pm
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Yeah, I completely understand. You're doing a GREAT job at describing it and getting the real feelings across. It's a really enjoyable read. A lot of the time it's really hard to get across because if you have encountered someone like that you block the event out so you don't really remember. You numb yourself. But you're really doing a great job at expressing all of it!May 14th, 2011 at 02:42pm
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No problem! I comment because I love it. I wish I had the bravery to write a story like that after my relationship with my own father, but I don't. I don't ever know if you ever encountered a man like that but you're certainly giving a voice to those who have! That's part of the reason I love your story :3May 14th, 2011 at 02:11pm
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Thank you for the lovely comment on my oneshot.
<3 I really appreciate it.
I've been so busy lately, with my mother being super-sick, and finals coming up, and just ugh, everything. Your comment made my day much better, love. <3May 14th, 2011 at 04:04am -
thank you for the comment <3333 i don't get much comments on my drabbles, so it was incredibly welcome <3
re: about the summary, i'm guilty of being ~in the zone~ when i'm writing, regardless of whether people get it or not. i wrote that piece with daenerys from game of thrones in mind, since she looks so elfish and so breakable... idek XDDDDDDMay 10th, 2011 at 12:52pm -
It is! It makes the reader come back for more! I love it so much :3May 9th, 2011 at 07:07pm
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you are most welcome :)May 9th, 2011 at 03:00pm
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You thank me too much for my comments. You shouldn't be thanking me, I should be thanking you. It's a great story and I really enjoy reading it :)May 7th, 2011 at 02:19pm
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Thank you for the poem comment!!!!!May 7th, 2011 at 05:06am
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Thank you for the poem comment, it means a lot to me :)May 6th, 2011 at 08:55pm
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lol. The comment was supposed to be funny sooo.... SUCCESS!!May 2nd, 2011 at 09:19am
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No problem! It's great :)May 1st, 2011 at 12:59pm
:)
I'm Rai.