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I Absoulty love your Ben bruce story complete favorite <3

Hey there! I just wanted to let you know that I've changed my username from dr. doctor to casting pearls
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Hi! This is a reminder that your entry for the Weird, Wild, and Wonderful contest is due in ONE WEEK.

http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/post/9762228/#9762228

-PinkMartini

Haha, it's no problem. <3

Sorry it took so long, but I replied to your message~

Ideas;
Maybe in the next chapter, it can be her first day on the job at the bar. And maybe she gets really, really tempted to get a drink. But then she remembers everything that Ben told her and how much she'd disappoint him if she did, so she doesn't.

Also, I think that if you'd like to cause some drama (which you should; after all, things shouldn't be just peaches and gravy all the time) Danny should start liking her. Maybe that's the reason he hated her all this time? Or *gasp* MAYBE HE HAD A CRUSH ON BEN. If you're willing to make that happen, it could actually work. After all, that would explain him hating all of Ben's girlfriends and trying to sabotage all of his relationships.

I don't know how much you like those ideas, but yeah. It would really help me if I knew the general direction in which this story was going so I can give you ideas that would go along with the way you're taking things.

Also, I really, [i]really[/i] like that part of the story in which you talked about how Ben had only raised his voice twice the entire time she had known him, and that was the first time, and then how he had only cried once and it wasn't going to happen that day. (I'm paraphrasing, but you get the idea.)

I'm just curious; have you figured out what those other times are yet? Because if you're stuck, I can try and help you with that as well.

Alright, I'm going to try and come up with some ideas. When I come up with something, I'll leave you a comment. c:

Lol, it's okay. Hey, at least your simself is with Ben Bruce and not like Taylor Lautner or something. Grossssssssss.

Wow, it didn't even go into recovery mode or anything? :o That's awful. If you'd like, I can try and help you with ideas.

Oh my god. That sounds amazingly entertaining. I usually just make either Ben or Cameron and then have them marry me, lulz. And I always make them rock stars.

Awwwww, I'm sorry. On the bright side, though, the chapters will probably come out a lot better. How did you lose them, anyway?

Oh my gosh, I love the Sims. Ugh. I remade Ben Bruce and had him marry my simself. xD

You also have a very quality Tumblr, by the way. I just followed you, haha. (my url is wolfbeast)

That's cool. I'm jelly of your pet turtle btw. c; <3
sjdhfkljasdhfjklads Oh my god, you did? That's terrible! I can relate though. I lose chapters all the time. It bothers me to no end. :o

Eh, not much. Trying to figure things out for the last chapter of my Cam story and playing Sims, lulz.

Ha, it's no problem. It really is great.

So what are you up to on this fine evening? c:

yay! thank you xD i'm happy to know i'm not the only one who does that!! happy you loved it ^.^ ohh, brendon. you never learn, you just rant a lot.

GET ONLINE PLEASE AND THANK YOU.

FUCK BITCH I WAS DOING HOMEWORK. I'M ON NOW. BE THERE OR BE SQUARE, BITCH <3

OMG GET ON YAHOO SOON YOU BEAST.
~ miss you, k?
<3

i'm so glad you liked my entry, i must admit was rather nervous 'cause it was my first smut and all. XD thank you! :)

thank youuuuu soo much for the comment on my entry. (: i should have my other entry done soon, hopefulllly.

Thank you so much for the comment on "To The Side In The End". It may be my second favorite thing I've written. Thank you so much, just in general.

would it be okay if i edited or is that against the rules. and im really srry i didnt make it 800 i just really wanted the paragraghs to spell brick by boring brick. I figured it'd be a lil more uniqge.

thank u so much. um whn do u think ull anounce the winners?

thank you so much for the comment on TMD!
i tried to use some lyrics, yes :) glad you thought i did well!
I'm very glad you liked my work, especially coming from YOU
the actual contest writer :) thanks so much <3