Thank-you for the comment on The Green Light 8D
And yes, I'll take your advice into consideration, and try revising the previous chapters, so thank-you very much for the constructive help :DDDD
"You're more punk, hardcore, mod, straightedge, emo, indie than me. Your hair is cooler, your pants are tighter, you have more tattoos. You have cooler pins on your bag and your favorite band is more obscure than mine. Your shoes are more vintage and so is your t-shirt. You own more black clothes than me. Your glasses are thicker and blacker than mine. Your photography is blacker and whiter. Your tie is whiter, or redder, or blacker. Because as we all know, that's what really matters to people, you win and I lose."
that's a shame, your poems were amazing btw... your stories probably would've been blocked, most are
damn school computers!! [also, i thought they'd blocked mibba i could've dieded!!]
hey. randomly found your mibba. loved it, was gonna comment. then realised your thing said you dont like new people... de4cided to comment anyway... so erm... Hi *waves* =] write back? dont eat me :P
You got into this semi-darkness hall and its got rooms and stuff and u shoot people with lazers, cause your wearing a suit that sensers when u get shot.
thank you, thank you, thank you.
i really can't say it any other way. thank you, right now, i'm just trying to get it out on Mibba. if you could perhaps spread the word to anybody you know, that would be appreciated so much.
once again, thank you.
And yes, I'll take your advice into consideration, and try revising the previous chapters, so thank-you very much for the constructive help :DDDD