sure thing honey. I know what its like to write a story and want feedback from it. So i just try to comment the best I can. It's really a good story and I can't wait for more.
If you're interested, Armor for Steph and I are writing a joint Frerard. I posted the first chapter only a little while ago. You can follow the link below if you're interested in reading it.
http://www.mibba.com/story/I-Am-Lightning-Zap/You-Can-Paint-My-Love/
i needs someone to luff ovar msn~8D