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  • AmeliaDef

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    Thank you for the feedback on my story, and I love you for getting a paragraph done. You see, I love you in general :"> thanks a lot Vany!
    July 25th, 2012 at 06:59pm
  • cecilliasshh

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    Ah i see :p you don't need to send it three times anyway lol here @cecillia_ydg
    July 19th, 2012 at 10:12am
  • cecilliasshh

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    Well- i've been busy writing some stuff earlier lol i have new twitter though :p nah.. This is "tonight" already ;) haha why wouldn't i? I bet i would! :3
    July 18th, 2012 at 06:27pm
  • cecilliasshh

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    Whoa.. Don't worry! Incase you forgot to update for real i'd come through your house and begging you for updates :p hey just suggests; what if there is a fight between john and alex again when john trying to explain then the plot twist which is lisa come over and talk to john and alex move to safe john's current girlfriend ((not lisa)) and when john admit everything and he'll finally apologise to alex :3
    July 14th, 2012 at 04:30am
  • EzioAuditore

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    Hey! :)
    I know your question is kind of easy, but I have to admit, I don't reallay know an answer...Sometimes, there's something i like and then there's something i don't... I'll check more of your stories to see if maybe there something a bit more of my liking :)
    June 16th, 2012 at 11:01am
  • arumdp

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    Thank you for commentingggg! Hahah. I wrote the credit already :p Glad you like Brendon's attitude there hahaha. Hayley and Brendon? Naah, I don't think that's what I'm going to write on my story~
    June 15th, 2012 at 05:23pm
  • arumdp

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    Wheeeeee, thanks for commenting on my new story, vanemooo :* Well I'm working on my best to make the story, so.. Let's see where my imagination takes me? Hahah.
    June 15th, 2012 at 06:53am
  • ofhorizons

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    I would love to! :) I'll definitely do that when I get the chance. :)
    June 13th, 2012 at 07:31pm
  • ofhorizons

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    I was happy I could offer my feedback! :) It wasn't a writing critique as in "I thought you should know, you would just doing it because it looks nice" or whatever, but I'm glad I was able to offer you that insight. :)
    June 12th, 2012 at 08:02am
  • Monochromatic Bliss;

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    Love, love, loveeee Big Bang <3 haha. Oh, good! I'm glad that some people actually do know who the characters are! It's only happened once before. I was like "WOW! So people DO know Big Bang on here."

    Before I get completely sidetracked, thank you for commenting! It really means a lot to me, and I'm very happy you liked it. :D
    June 10th, 2012 at 09:16am
  • My Wayward Son

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    i really appreciate your enthusiasm for my stories, but i'm on spring break right now xD the only reason i'm not on the computer 24/7 is because i get hauled around this island with my family, haha. i'll try to update when i get back, though
    April 3rd, 2012 at 05:31am
  • cecilliasshh

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    ahaha I love you more. Sorry for the late comment, I just checked my email though :p ahhh yes, I am! :D haha I love your stories anyway. Hehe
    April 1st, 2012 at 11:06am
  • noviangelss

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    You mean about John and Alex? :p
    I'll keep reading, though. It's such a good story and I'll be sorry if I miss it :)
    March 28th, 2012 at 08:23am
  • My Wayward Son

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    thanks so much for the story comment on "this deafening silence"; i really appreciate it! haha i'm glad, i don't like bailey that much, either
    March 27th, 2012 at 07:38pm
  • arumdp

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    Wheeee, I can't wait to read it!! Same here, maybe I'll update my story before or maybe after the national exam. Fingers-crossed for both of us.. and the rest of the senior year kids! :D
    March 24th, 2012 at 12:47pm
  • Last Real Dreamer

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    Thank you for your comment!
    I've no intention in continuing that story, I've tried but it never worked out, it's just too cliché for my liking. And thanks for pointing that out, I've fixed it. :)
    March 16th, 2012 at 09:30am
  • Last Real Dreamer

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    Ugh, same here, it's the most boring part of English class :|
    March 15th, 2012 at 03:01pm
  • My Wayward Son

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    thanks so much for your story comment on "roughly six feet tall"; i really appreciate it! :) haha don't thank me for posting; i know my updates are spread out a fucking lot, lol, but i'm trying to change that
    March 14th, 2012 at 10:50pm
  • Last Real Dreamer

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    You're welcome~ and it's totally cool, it's not our first language after all right? :)
    March 14th, 2012 at 03:53pm
  • Last Real Dreamer

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    I'm pretty sure it won't, I really like this story.
    Well 'Nick couldn’t help but smile to hear that voice he had been missed' should be '...hearing that voice he had been missing.' 'that made Nick thought' should be 'that made Nick think' there are still some others but I don't think they can fit in this comment.
    March 13th, 2012 at 03:27pm