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Thank ou for the story comment, I don't want to be held responsible for you putting off your work, but i'm very glad you're still reading.

And about the grammar and spelling, yes, it was purely to do with writing that out within 15 minutes. I was just about to leave the house, and I wanted to get it up, i'll go through the past few updates once I put the next one up, and correct them all. It pisses me off when people have bad spelling and grammar in their story, cause they should really check it, so I'll try and make sure i have time to edit my stuff before I put it up :)
Sorry about the teasing, i'm writing the next one now!

Thank you for the comment.
I know that my story does have a lot of factual faults but it is entirely my own doing and I am quite aware when marie antoinette died and so on and so forth. But I find it that people (like you) who point out things like this, like thier stories to be somewhat in line with the actual events and I find that quite intelligent. However, I'm far too lazy to do this and so I bend it to my will. Hehehehe I am glad though, despite the lack of events and dates, that you still enjoy my story.
Annie Black. ^^

Lol yep he is
remember the description says he has a perverted side that he keeps a secret well theres a good reason for that ^^

Yep
i figured out that the computer at my library lets me on mibba so ill probably check it once a day or so and if i write a new chapter then i can post it on a more regular basis i plan on writing some new chapters today since i dont have to work so ill be doing that later

True most of my writing is in third person im not sure why just makes it easier i guess, but Monster, Vengeance, and Spirit Of The Freshly Fallen Snow are all in first person btw. idk usually if i write in first person i forget to type I and Me and so on so i find third person easier because i can include everyones thoughts at the same time and get farther with teh story, first person you only have one persons thoughts and eh for short stories like these third is much easier. and i realize that if i were to write a book, which is my goal one day, that i would need some editing before i even faced a publisher. thats sorta why i post stories here for now is to practice for the days to come, thanks for loving my writting so much your now like my #2 fangirl Lol, of course alyssa was the first to love my writting she stays #1 anyways please keeep reading and commenting its greatly appreciated ^^*

Wow ur reading everything of mine rnt u, wow am i really that good?

Yeah only downside is i dont know much techy stuff so ill have to look some up but that wont be hard i guess idk i think i could do it i wanted to finish Monster before i started another story i mean i got three going right now with two stories on hold i need to finish at least one

My idea for a possibly upcoming story is like this

I, Alice
Takes place a few years in the future, this doctor looses his wife and daughter and goes into seclusion with his son. He builds himself a replacement daughter, the first true Artificially Living Integrated Centiant Being, or Alice. He is arrested for his work and his son and alice have to go into hiding. Alice is a perfect being, programed to stay alive and keep the doctors son safe no matter what and she has the ability to protect him from all those who come after them as they try to rescue their father. Even though alice is a machine she seems human, looks human, feels human, she feels... and she falls in love with the doctors son


Idk its a REALLY early rough draft i usually edit things around alot this is the first basis of my strories i edit a few times before an actuall first chapter is born So what do u think?

Blood With Strawberry is actualy my only fanfiction ive been meaning to start another but i have so many of my own ideas that i dont have time for them, but yeah its a Naruto fanfic and as for the ending where she died. Gaara is my favorite character and it didnt feel right to have him be happy in the end, it just doesnt fit his character

Fantastic ur like my newest best friend Lol
Since u like what i write i got a story idea that i might start soon if you wanna tell me what u think

Really? Thanks bunches I really do like to write and get all these stories out of my head for others to read. Some of my stories rnt popular though... idk y but the ones taht i really work hard on always turn out good. If you like what i write please feel free to read more of my stories and tell me what u think about them aswell

Why Thank you, that was a really early story of mine i just finished it recently and its kinda popular Lol

Thank you comment on meh story much appreciated

Thanks for the story comment!
Made my day :)
Glad I made you laugh.
(And yeah, the ryan Ross story is pretty depressing.)

I updated "Losers" comment read suscribe enjoy:)

No problem! (= . Nice to meet you Berry :D .
So, how's your day ?

Our welcome:)
thanks for thanking me for helping you:)

Ok well, when you go to write your story title, short and long discription, there's a box that says Layouts. There, you pick whoever one. When you find the one your looking for, you finish your touches and submit. Oh, and if you made your own, it'll be either the first or last

i'm listening to music and talking to people and doodleing...exsiteing right?

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