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Thanks for telling me! I'm gonna change that now!

'Ello. I hope you're doing well.
I just wanted to let you know I started two new stories on top of my others and I would love it if you could give them a review when you had a chance because I really appreciate and value your opinon on writing.

Thanks.
- M.

thanks so much for the poem comment!

I really appreciate your analysis of my story. I think I already said something along those lines, but I feel the need to say it again.
I really do try and acquaint myself with my characters, so it's nice of you to acknowledge that (I wasn't sure If I was doing all right with introducing them to the reader!)

I also find it interesting that you're not rooting for them to be together.
That's the first time anyone has expressed anything different!
I found your analysis of their love to be very interesting and quite accurate as well!

You're a very refreshing reader and I'm thankful you appreciate my story. I especially like the honesty behind your words (and i've already voiced that as well).

I really hope you keep reading, because your comments are helping me along with the story!

Heyy!
Thanks for the add!
What's up?

hey thanks for the comment, i like that mibba enforces good grammar, hopefully it'll make me become a better writer. well I hope to read threw some of your stuff and hopefully you can read through some of mine. I like your profile, especially where it says you would talk about how unique you are but that would only make u seem ordinary, very cool.

I was really going for 'enthralling' (for the first six chapters)
But I guess there's a thin line between that and confusing!
I appreciate the honesty, I much prefer what you actually think instead of the same old "I love your story front to back!" thing.

I've been glancing over a few chapters and the whole 'right side' thing is starting to get to me too, but I didn't want it on the left (That's where everyone would expect me to put it!)

I'm really not too great at Yoga either. Let's just say i'm not too amazing at that part where you have to hold the pose. It was taken on a good try!

I'm glad you checked out Strawberry Wine because, as you know, I always apperciate your reviews ecspecially and find them to be really helpful, so thank you!

Yeah, this first person business is very new to me, I'm still on the fence with it, but I don't hate it yet.

Oh! Well in that case I hope you keep reading it!

I think that's an admirable decision - the whole 'swearing off boys' thing- it's probably very smart too. I should probably think about that too!

And it's no problem, I read your comment last night and I wanted to respond, but I didn't think It would make any sense If I tried to last night!

Weee!!! Your whole comment has me grinning like a fool. Nobody has ever told me that or commented me on my writing, truthfully, so I appreciate that so much. You've got me walking on clouds.

Hey, thanks for the random friend request.
Actually, I'm not sure whether people say thanks for things like that, but I figured I should (It really does seem like the polite thing to do!)
I like how it says that your characters are real people you just haven't met yet, I feel like that about my characters too!
I'm Elle (by the way!)
How's life going for you?

thaaaank you for the comment!
and yes, i do have my reasons for making faris and pen move so [i]fast[/i]. haha. i know that it would seem unrealistic at times, but hopefully the way it's written in my head makes up for that. :]]]]]]]

thanks for the comments on my journal :)

Yes, that's my Zj when she was just a baby. She's two now and a huge trouble maker (whoa, I sound like a mother)

Anywho, it's always nice to get those comments that say "Oh, so good. Update more!" but I much prefer getting constructive crtisicm, how else can anyone ever improve, right?

I hope your day has gotten a little bit better. Even though I am a religious person and someone who has a lot of faith, I still find the idea of God and Jesus baffling sometimes and lately, ecspecially, i've really been asking myself a lot of big questions and figuring out my relationship with him and reading your journal actually shed a new perspective for me.

I definately ignored his many pleas for food and knocks against the plastic walls of his tank. I was a horrible mother to Elvis.

Your comments. Definately bring a big smile to my face. I love knowing what you think because you're always so thorough and detailed in what you tell me!

By the way, Mae is fabulous. I haven't listened to them in so long.

hey, u left a comment on one of my journals... something about chatspeak..?

Thanks for the add. :]

thanks for the journal comment :) yeah, summer is more about flings. i should take out the part about love, but it is about lust. rain is completely beautiful <3

I'm glad you caught onto the inner workings of Angeles because even though I haven't really dug deeper into her, I always felt there was more to her ecspecially since she doesn't really have strong relations with anybody.

I know I have lot more places I want to take this story, but I don't have an exact chapter count down for it. It'll probably be a lot longer than my other stories because I have a lot of ideas I want to entertain still.