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  • MollyDoll

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    thanks so much! your constant commenting makes me want to marry you =D lol
    March 2nd, 2011 at 09:44pm
  • abbythebollix

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    yeah, makes me real happy about the danish health care system, even if they sometimes fuck it up, too. and i will try not to be, but it's in my nature ;]
    anyway, those ideas i mentioned... i've got two "major" ones, i mean two that i'm actually considering. i'm going to send them to your inbox right now, i think, just gonna type something up that makes sense haha.
    February 27th, 2011 at 09:22pm
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    yeah, i forgot to ask you about that, and i'm so sorry to hear about it. did the doctors find out what's wrong? i've been worried :(.
    xo abby
    February 27th, 2011 at 07:42pm
  • abbythebollix

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    Hello, I love you.

    Seriously. Comments like yours are absolutely staggering and what makes writing fanfiction benefitable and worthwhile for me, so I genuinely want to thank you <3 You ARE the best, without a doubt.


    I’m wondering why I don’t have more comments too, because let’s just face it, my story’s awesome, but that shouldn’t take the light away from the fact that I am so grateful to you people who comment.
    I am soo happy you caught onto those sentences – it seems like it’s always you who knows what lines to take notice of, because you’re the only one who hangs onto the few sentences that, in my opinion, lift my prose style from general to fucking awesome.
    (I apologize if I sound full of myself)
    I’m happy that you seemed to think their feelings got across, because I was unsure of that particular point, but I was just tired of her holding back when hey, it’s Ville Valo, how much willpower can you have?
    Wait for it. Just wait for it.
    Xx Abby
    PS: I will, too. But I’m going to introduce you to a couple of ideas of mine and then you can decide which one I should write on. Ha!
    February 27th, 2011 at 09:50am
  • MollyDoll

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    ahh your too nice haha
    February 20th, 2011 at 11:02pm
  • MollyDoll

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    thanks so much, i really love your comments <3
    February 20th, 2011 at 08:55pm
  • abbythebollix

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    Pretty good. Winter break's on after school today, so I'm stoked! I'm going to London sunday to tuesday, so I'm pretty damn good! :D
    How about you <3?
    February 18th, 2011 at 08:28am
  • abbythebollix

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    I'm happy to hear that. I get the feeling that many fanfic readers just want to be "lazy-readers", as I call them in my head (xD), which basically means they're too lazy to analyze anything and just want to read something like Twilight where there's no depth in prose style and everything is laid out and explained. I like complex writing and I love analyzing and interpreting as you go along, but I sometimes think no one else wants to do that :b

    Who knows? This is fiction, after all. No, I'm kidding. I haven't quite decided what Jim does for a living yet, but we'll see.

    And yes, we do have kind of intelligent but also kind of retarded conversation. 'Tis nice <3
    February 17th, 2011 at 09:46pm
  • abbythebollix

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    I can forgive you, seeing I'm a foreigner and can always say I heard wrong if I were to defend you in a court of law ;)

    Thanks so much! Stephen was never a favourite of mine. I had planned for Dave to be one of the main characters in the story, but I really hate writing him and I didn't want the story to take on a "good people vs. bad people" angle. Sometimes I think if I should, after I've finished the story, post a sort of like analysis of the whole thing where I explain everything like I've done in some messages to you? some people might find it intereesting because my writing isn't as straight-forward as most fanfiction is.

    And there are many beautiful Jim's, like Jim Morrison, and, uh, Jim Morrison :'D
    February 17th, 2011 at 08:18pm
  • abbythebollix

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    Thanks for commenting! That was quite surprising - not because you never give me feedback, but because you were so quick! xD
    And yeah, re-reading it I came to realise that Steven was a bit sassy, as you called it, but I've always seen him and Zoe as friends. And no, we're not going into details with Steven - his background is not relevant to the plot, but I just wanted it to seem like Zoe kind of saw him as a real human being instead of just some "Mary Sue" like boy who was just there, you know? She notices things about him that she hasn't before, and he says to her that he doesn't want her to do that because they're not friends. And why do you think I had him reading the same book Zoe and Ville discussed in an earlier chapter? I tell you, it wasn't a coincidence.


    Why not? Jim is a good, american name, haha. I've wanted to portray Jim as a really reliable and good man for her, in contrast to what Ville is. And yeah, it sort of hit me that I needed to explain that as well, and then I remembered that my grandfather never wore a wedding ring because his friend lost his finger in construction (which my grandfather also worked in).

    Katie, you're the best <3 xo Abby
    February 17th, 2011 at 05:15pm
  • MollyDoll

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    thanks girlie! and no, i havent really talked to the person, but i've reported them a whole bunch haha. if it keeps up im going to say something. thanks so much <3
    February 15th, 2011 at 10:29pm
  • abbythebollix

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    I'll begin on another one as soon as I finish In Venere Veritas, I think... And I am never going to get tired of hearing such praise :'D
    And I have. Added you. Both MSN and skype, even though it said you didn't have skype. Are you MSN online?
    February 13th, 2011 at 11:45am
  • abbythebollix

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    Actually.... Zoe's husband will make an appearance very soon. There's only like 5-10 chapters left of the story. Hate me.
    And yeah, I totally get that. This is actually the first Valo story I think I'm going to finish, because I usually abandon my stories when I realise they're crap. I'm not very proud of In Venere Veritas compared to some other stuff I've done, but people like it, and I kind of need the self-confidence boost :D
    February 13th, 2011 at 11:32am
  • abbythebollix

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    Thanks! I'll take that as a compliment ;)
    You know, I had never planned for Zoe to have feelings for Ville. When I began writing this story, I wanted her to be friends with him (although she would seriously be hot for him haha) but not be in love with which she sort of is / isn't. It's hard for me to write because it's hard for me to figure out how she feels, and I hope that gets across when people read the story that Zoe is in some conflict with what she should do, even though she knows she loves her husband more or in a different way than Ville.

    Anyway, story rant is over haha :D when are you going to write on "nice and content"? and by the way, this comment talking thing is stupid :) Do you have msn or skype?
    February 13th, 2011 at 11:14am
  • abbythebollix

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    I think I got your comment after reading it three times, and you're absolutely right in the sense that even though Zoe loves him, she doesn't "true-love-forever" love him, at least not the way he thinks he loves her. But I'm happy you caught onto that particular line!
    February 13th, 2011 at 11:09am
  • abbythebollix

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    I <3 you ;]
    February 13th, 2011 at 11:00am
  • abbythebollix

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    I'm so happy you liked it. That's the exact same things I've been thinking while writing, so I'm happy people "got the message", so to speak.
    And the whole chapter's up now. Love me <3
    February 13th, 2011 at 10:56am
  • abbythebollix

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    Yeah.... I think many of my readers want it to be very typical in the sense that they want every single detail about their relationship, but I don't really want that, you know? I'm writing specific scenes for specific purposes. But I'll give you a teaser:
    "Zoe was waiting behind the sound board when the band came from the other end of the theatre and walked up to take the stage. The sound tests were getting more and more dull; she’d come to realize that it was not the job she was so fond of, it was Ville, and he barely looked at her this afternoon. During the sound test she fucked up his microphone on purpose, just to see if he would correct her, but he pretended nothing was wrong and stalked out of the room when Dave called the test over. "
    And I'm thankful you're staying online for my sake :'D
    February 13th, 2011 at 10:48am
  • abbythebollix

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    thanks, you're a doll <3
    haha, i'm actually trying to finish the new chapter of in venere veritas... i think i'm going to be done within the next half an hour, so if you stay logged on you will be the first to read it, haha :] i'm really proud of it, actually. i think it's going to be good.
    February 13th, 2011 at 10:41am
  • abbythebollix

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    Well I hope it turns out you're going to be all right :) I tend to worry about to everyone and everything, so after the scan, drop me a line to tell me how it went? :]
    February 13th, 2011 at 09:43am