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Thanks for the story comment. He does hate her through part of it, but he comes to his senses. That's the biggest conflict in the story. He called her a mistake, etc etc.

Hahhah, thanks for the comment on F.I.T!
Johhny Depp, that was seriously funny.
=P

Lol. Me too. :D

Ah, sweet! You're a bomb! :D

thank you! i appreciate the comment! :D

Here is an idea. Don't read the story if you are annoyed by it. No one else complains.

Thank you for the story comment!
It really means a lot.

Oh yeah, fuck, I wasn't just gunna. Let it go. Yeah haha.

I understand, but I just couldn't like have it be all nice and tidy, it had to be messy. AND some of those are total fillers, to be honest with you haha. I agree, it was prob too much haha. It's not going to get worse, thats it, but it is going to be two or three parts yet before they're back together.
Plus, between you and be, that will probably be the end, after all that, because of what I have planned, SO.

I don't know how to fix the error - I didn't make the layout and therefore don't know the coding - but I can provide you with a link to the page with all my stories on it.

http://member.mibba.com/28872/stories/

yeah you'd be surprised, i some times post a oneshot in comps and i got 2 subscriber and like 40 reads.... it all about reputation and quality really. the best writers are the ones that have MASSIVE comments that are really detailed coz their story is so complex!!!

I'm glad you like it and i'm sorry that the grammar sucks but i'd rather keep it the way it is. It was my first story and i like to keep it to remind me to do better!

I'm sorry to hear that you won't continue reading 'Sweet Child O' Mine'. You can't please everyone, however, so I won't complain about it. Hopefully you change your mind and decide to finish it, along with the third story in the trilogy.

thanks for the story comment.

well, that story you read was written and finished like about 2 years ago. I have definitely learned a lot and you guessed it right, english is not my first language - finnish is (and it's grammatically completely different to english). I know I still make weird mistakes with my writing, but it could be a lot worse. But hey, that's why began writing; I wanted to learn and become better with my english... and of course learn to make good stories.But yeah, I don't write onto this site anymore. Got tired of it.

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