Id want her to find someone who is a loyal customer, but then it builds into something, and all this crap is reveiled about her life, he understands but he cant be with her, what will the world say and all. What do you think?
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BLOod spilled on the floor, spreading sickenly and smelling thick .
I desceibed it abstractly like this
The grey balls of shadows darted pass the tree lining, men raoring in despair as they were hunted. but i must stay on track, this is no longer a war, it's a game and i must play by the rules.
and you don't really see any one die, your just pretty much trying to get the destination, couple of scary attack but not sick filling
I have uploaded a new pic- it is some thing i might replace the after-life project with - I'm calling it The Immortal War. It's has Ghost in it but you'll never guess who he is. But at the same time you'll love the new charactors, Safire is the main. I'll up load a chapter and see if it's worth doing.