I like this one better.
Okay my feed back is.
I love your stories. you are improving a lot. I can see it. But the concept of the stories has been done to death. all the same stories over and over again. everyone does it. a girl hates JB and then they fall in love. add a twist!
Oh and do you wanna go watch the JB movie with me and a few other people when it comes out?
Awww, thank you :D