Hey I just wanted to thank you for the constructive criticism. I REALLY appreciate it! I reread the section and realized you were right and it was confusing. But thank you so much for the comment and reading! :)
But yeah...her parent's death is a big part of the story ... but later... In my head, maybe a month's passed since then? (I know...I had to go double check. @.@) But yeah ... I imagined Bel as the sort who'll ignore it and pretend they aren't dead or she'll bottle up all the grief and depression and keep it to herself. I guess the best way to describe it right now is that she's sort of ... numb to it? o.O But yeah, it'll play a part in the story later. :3
You spelled it right. And that's interesting. Someone mentioned that series to me before and I DID read the first book, but I actually found it boring and really different from mine. >.< You'd think I'd like it, but nope. The main character annoyed me. She was really self-centered and conceited. . And, besides, the "Mark" or whatever it's called, is totally different than my vamps. Not to mention that that story doesn't have wolves or any other species. ^^ I'm glad you like mine better. That's awesome sauce! Makes me feel accomplished.
Ahhh. Neferet. I remember her. She goes evil?? Typical. She had that creepiness about her. . That's kind of cliched, though. . But it's a good theory.
And you're on the right track about the reasons why she would seem so nice. But Roison's actually very mischievious. She's good at heart, just likes to keep things interesting. . But you'll find out if it's her or not in the next chapter! And YAAAAAAAAAAAAY for Cornelius!!! I wouldn't mind if you talked to me about my story. I absolutely LOVE feedback, questions and theories on them. I get so excited to hear what my readers think. Go ahead and send me a message and we'll chat about it for a while. I would love that. ^^
Yay for a Cornelius fan!!!!! I'm SOOOO glad there's one out there besides me. >.< Makes me soo happy. ^^ lol. There will be more soon. . I hope. O.O Only time will tell. =)
Aw, thank you =)
when I first read your comment, I was like.. Uh oh-___- hahaha
but thanks again for the feedback!
I already have the next few chapters written, but I'm just waiting for more feedback =)