June 4th, 2011 at 02:50am
Okay, THROAM (The heart rate of a mouse) is known as the Ryden Bible, it is without doubt the BEST Ryden I have ever, ever (EVER!) read. As a warning though it is rated NC 17+ for a reason so yeah...but here's the link anyway :D hope you like it if you're brave enoungh to read it!
http://beggarsnotes.livejournal.com/55360.html
You can always improve, and I’m glad you’re planning out the sequel.