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Basically he isn't a "nobody" that Jean can just ignore. Jean's starting to see Jamie as an actual person and it bothers him.

Does that make sense? Let me know if it doesn't!

Thanks. I tried to make it realistic. It's nice to know it actually was

Thanks for your comment on Behind My Pretty Face, if I may ask what did you like about it?

Yep! It's really all written out (which is why it's being update so quickly :3 )

Tell me about it! I know I need to work on it more but....idk nothing is coming to mind :,( I feel like I need to write about it being the calm before the storm kinda thing.

lmfao Ace? I guess he is ;D

Thanks!

Thanks for the comment on Songbird =D I am glad you like it so much :) but I am kinda at a writer's block at the moment for it sadly DX

Thanks for the comment on Playing With Fire. I just wanted to reassure you that you're not supposed to undestand what's going on yet. It'll get clearer as the story goes on.

Thank you so much for the commet :3
There's more to come X)

dont worry, i will add more chapters ;D

Really? That's awesome! She's gorgeous.

Ha thanks man :D She really was. She just stopped talking to Valerie for no logical reason and talking behind her back. Then she started with me and I just couldn't stand her complaining and "better than you" attitude. And I would too, I'm violent like you. xD Except then I wouldn't graduate and would be kicked off going to six flags, so noooo.
& Val was flirting with him, like touching his chest and stuff "And she's touching his chest now, he takes off her dress, now, let me go.." ha, wow. It sucks to see them always flirting. She knows I like him, and he was all holding me today and she pushed him and got all separating us, and that was one of our first actual conversations. Yet she says she doesn't like him? -.-
How are you doing lovely? I feel this conversation is one sided (or just too much about myself.)

I just want to be friends though, I don't need to date him or anything. I'm just fixing our friendship, cause if I leave my school after graduation NOT on good speaking terms with him I don't know what I'll do. He's a sweetheart, I could never do that..
OHMUH'SHIT VAL TOTALLY TREATED HER ASS!!! :DDDD
My ex best friend (Lili) wrote a note complaining how she's tired of Valerie's crap and sick of me cause I 'chose Val over her' and I told her off, like "I didn't choose her over you you drove me to stop being your friend. You were always talking shit about me and my friends and giving me dirty looks when I was almost the ONLY person to talk to you all day, I gave up sitting with Valerie at school so you wouldn't feel lonely and this is how you repay me? Don't fucking act like your the victim when we all know its the opposite. Talk shit about me or my friends again, I will personally wipe the floor with your face." and she shut up.
Then after Val was going to her locker (and waiting for Lili) who didn't show up but was waiting for Val to leave. But Val waited and she comes out and Val goes all "I know you called me a hypocrite but uh-" and lili was all "Nothing to say?" making that talking motion with her hands and Val was all "Oh I've got a lot to say. I heard you talking shit about me, everyone knows it, and I know you call me a hypocrite, which I am. I said I'd never hang out with trash and I hung out with you." and Lili was all "Honey-" and Val was all "Don't fucking Honey me. I did so much shit for you blah blah blah backstabbing fuck blah blah blah" like shiiit. Then Mr.S comes and goes "Cat fight?" and she runs away, and Val's all "Talk to me when you can say shit to my face"
I'm so proud. :D
I sound like a bitch but she screwed us all over, honestly. I'm not normally this bitchy.

You'll find out why next chapter. I've decided to continue the story as planned. :) Thanks for the comment and Kat didn't show up, to James misfortune.

Thank you for both of your comments on the story! I really appreciate it :)
I'm really sorry about you being in abusive relationships -.- boys who hit girls is just wrong.
And a brief rundown of my 'boy trouble'
girl likes boy, boy & girl become best friends, boy goes out with girls other best friend, break up, boy and girl get into huge fight over nothing, (all boy's fault) boy and girl no longer friends, boy is huge dick to girl for a year, boy is huge man whore, boy gives girl slight recognition, boy is douche to girl with slight acts of kindness, girl sad and in love with him the whole time.

Thank you for the story comment!! :DD I thought James was doing the rational thing to and lol James and Kat are most definitely meant to be together.

Dude, your amazing! I love how you love my story, even tho i think its crap! Your amazing. and I will totally read that story.

Thanks for your support!

Thank you for the story comment. It's not done yet, don't worry! I have plans for this story =)

Thank you for your comment on my story. Hopefully ill get to that chapter within the next week or two. im trying to get more writing in. hope you'll stay too and i'd love to hear any other comments you may have as well.