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  • ClaudiaBiedles

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    Hey again ;)! So, I was thinking about a little description idea you could add to 'Fickled Things' and maybe it could be along the lines of "Adelaide is a carefree, unordinary (blah, blah, description). Jack is a ordinary (blah, descrip. ;D). What happens when these two worlds collide?" Ehh? Lmaoo. Well, I was thinking SOMETHING like that. You don't have to do that, btw, I was just trying to throw out ideas ;)
    March 29th, 2011 at 05:48am
  • ClaudiaBiedles

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    Haha, alright. Your gonna be updating some of them again? That's awesome! (: I'll probably check some out if I have time. Oh, and advice, don't start too many stories at a time. It will be harder for you to update them sooner if you ever get busy, and then your subscribers will just get more anxious! Haha, unless you can handle it, then by all means, go right ahead ;)
    Good luck with everything! I'll keep in touch! (;
    March 29th, 2011 at 03:15am
  • ClaudiaBiedles

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    Well, I can tell you that I like the main summary you already have up. But, you know those little descriptions that people put up just to sum up the whole thing a little? If you do, then yeah you should definitely add one of those. Just something small that you would like & read if it wasn't your story but someone elses, something that you think would catch people's attentions. I'm not really good at thinking with any... but if I do get an idea I'll be sure to let you know. And, if you don't know what I'm talking about, just tell me and I'll find a way to explain or show it to you ;D <3
    March 29th, 2011 at 02:46am
  • ClaudiaBiedles

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    Hey there! I was looking through your stories & I noticed that you tend to stop updating most of them after a while. If you do that because not many people are commenting/subscribing to your stories, a good little description can catch a readers attention. [: I currently subscribed to your 'Fickled Things' story, and I REALLY like it so far, so I don't want to see that story given-up on just because of little popularity. I honestly accidentally clicked on it & read the summary. If I hadn't of done that, I probably would have just skimmed past it and went on to something else. BUT, I'm glad I didn't. I'm just saying, maybe if you add a little description or something that it could catch a reader's attention ;)
    March 28th, 2011 at 06:27am
  • Vulpes Vulpes

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    Thanks so much for the story comments, I really appreciate them :)
    March 27th, 2011 at 09:00pm
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    Thank you for the story comment :)
    March 23rd, 2011 at 12:14am
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    THANK YOU :D
    March 22nd, 2011 at 11:38pm
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    Thank you for the story comment (:
    March 22nd, 2011 at 11:18pm
  • Mrs. Ninja Jones

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    Thanks for the comment! I've always had a tendency for my stories to be too boring so I wanted to do something different with this one. There are multiple twists in the future of this story.
    February 2nd, 2011 at 11:52pm
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    Thank ya for the story comment!
    January 31st, 2011 at 06:04am
  • Lolita.

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    Thanks for your encouraging words on Perfect Strangers! Can't wait for your next comment, they help so mucch
    January 28th, 2011 at 10:44pm
  • nice1

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    heyy! thanks for the commet, im almost done with the next chapter. ideas are welcome!!! :D
    January 27th, 2011 at 09:37pm
  • baby-cakes

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    thanks for the comment on my story;
    i know it's a bit unusual, but it means a lot that you at least are interested in reading more (:
    January 27th, 2011 at 04:25am
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    thank you for the story comment, i appreciate it. <3
    January 22nd, 2011 at 11:20pm
  • marriahjustine

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    Thank you so much for commenting on my story :D
    January 19th, 2011 at 04:47am
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    Thanks for the story comment! Sorry it took so long to say anything!
    January 8th, 2011 at 09:46am
  • JamieAllOver

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    Thank you so much for the story comment. I loved your comment, it was so sweet! :)
    January 5th, 2011 at 03:38am
  • xlaura17x

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    Thank you so so so much for the story comment Sweetie :]
    AND Merry Christmas! xox
    December 24th, 2010 at 11:33pm
  • LisaSerendipity

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    Hey thanks so much for commenting on my story All Fall Down. It was a really heart warming comment that really made me proud (I can seem to think of a better word on the spot) of my story. Thank you so much.
    December 15th, 2010 at 12:13am
  • tunnels

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    Hi! Thank you so much for commenting on Into the Airwaves!! :D
    December 3rd, 2010 at 04:50am