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  • AmorarEsDeVivir

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    Hey, thanks so much for all the great poem comments! I'm really glad you like my work. Do you mind if I ask how you came by my poetry?
    July 27th, 2012 at 06:10am
  • teenagedream91

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    Oh and yes I think I had small heart attacks each time I saw my little buddy, well he isn't so little anymore, but he was just too cute when I first got him.
    July 27th, 2012 at 05:44am
  • teenagedream91

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    Yeah and I was the only one in the house with her when it first happened so I was like running around not knowing what to do, so I carried her and took her to the nearest hospital which wasn't the wisest thing I could have done, should've called instead, but I was just so freaked out that was the first thing that popped into my mind. Must be a scary feeling that anxiety could be that bad for you, my mom had her first panic attack while she was driving with my brother and he had to take over. My brother drove to my grandmother's house and boy was my grandmother freaking out while my brother called 911.

    Imagine teaching him how to drive a car? I wouldn't even do that because god knows what he would do, break the steering wheel or a window? Who knows, so many things are plausible when it comes to Thor. Loki does seem like that type, it would start off with little things and the wife would become some sadistic maniac along side her crazy husband.

    Yes, thank her and her six year old ways XD Sure and thanks! I will ask you for help if needed. i think I have enough info to start something tonight and hopefully I can get a chapter out within this weekend. It's fun when you are on the same page and it can go on for a while. It sucks when you dont' share that magic with someone.
    July 27th, 2012 at 05:43am
  • teenagedream91

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    It's different with everyone and yeah it is difficult to bring them back to reality. There was one time where i had to take her to the hospital because I had no idea how to deal with it. It's scary when something like that happens, she should have given me some warning that she has these panic attacks. She should take care of herself, but you know how that is. No one does that anymore so kudos to you for knowing what your triggers are and how to manage it.

    True, Thor is a simple yet complex character to write about since he has no thought process when it comes to human technology. He tends to smash things haha and yeah that can be something I can write about! That would be so hilarious XD You're right, every girl wants to be that person that can proudly say that they tamed someone like Loki which I kind of find it hard to believe that he would be pussy whipped, in a sense. I think he would be the one that will be in control if he was in any kind of relationship and manipulated his spouse or whoever into what he believes in.

    haha right! i would bounce off ideas with someone and they would be like 'how in the hell did you come up with that?' and they would give me suggestions and I wouldn't feel any inspiration on growing ideas that I had or what they had. I had a feeling that I would have to trash my old ideas for new ones, I'm just glad that I didn't start the story because that would have been a waste haha I would have just one chapter and that would have been it. So thank you, little cuz.
    July 27th, 2012 at 04:36am
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    Oh, don't worry, I didn't take it offensively. Thank you so much. c: Every comment means the world to me, honestly!
    July 27th, 2012 at 04:21am
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    Thank you for the story comment! c: I'm glad you're enthusiastic about it. XD I'm actually about to start the second chapter right now, so that should be up in an hour or so.
    July 27th, 2012 at 04:05am
  • teenagedream91

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    That's good that you know when to take them and how you feel when you are about to get it. I know a few people that are horrible at keeping track of their anxiety. One of my best friends always has panic attacks because she doesn't have her pills on hand for precaution. It freaks me out every time she has one, but I am getting better at handling it and not some blabbering mess. No they aren't, but driving up the coast is beautiful being surrounded by swamps, not so much haha.

    hehe well I think Thor needs a little love here and maybe it's just easier to write a Loki story because of how he is. I mean i have come across people that tell me that they are going to write a Thor story and suddenly they write a Loki one instead because of how easier it is.

    No, it didn't discourage me. Like I said in the message, I really like bouncing ideas with someone to get better ideas in the long run. It doesn't take me that long to write 600 words, but that instant it did and I think it was pretty horrible anyways so i am not mad for her deleting it.
    July 26th, 2012 at 09:16pm
  • Saul Hudson

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    I knoow i knoow :3

    And we might never but i shall try to be more often then i currently am how have you been?
    July 26th, 2012 at 08:52pm
  • Saul Hudson

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    Herro :3 i thought id say herro again and after seeing your icon tell you that my boyfriend looks like Thor :3
    July 26th, 2012 at 08:41pm
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    thank you for the story comment! <3 :)
    July 26th, 2012 at 06:06pm
  • teenagedream91

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    Oh it's that bad for you? I don't take anxiety meds, usually I am not that nervous, but I do get a bit mean when I am a nervous wreck so I tend to stay alone during that time of stress XD That is a long drive man and during those hours your ass and legs are just begging to do something than just sitting there. If it's that long we have pit stops where we just walk around to stretch our legs since blood clots can be formed by just sitting there for too long.

    i don't get it how so many stories are like that and even then, Loki turns into this sweet man. Uh, hello this is Loki we are talking about not the man that plays Loki. They are two different people, keep him in character. I would never write a story about a human girl and Loki it's overrated.

    She accidentally deleted them, she was looking through my files on word and found a long list of prewrites and outlines that I have created because my mind goes haywire when I see a movie or a show and I get inspired, the ones that she deleted, most of them i didn't care for, but she did delete the one for Gentle Heart XD it wasn't much, maybe 600 words or a little more. Not that much.
    July 26th, 2012 at 05:58pm
  • teenagedream91

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    I would be really shy so it wouldn't be a problem to keep my mouth shut haha the longest I have been in the car was a little over ten hours and I became sort of restless, just need to bring things to keep you occupied. It's not bad driving around when you have scenery around you too.

    It got predictable after a while and the whole Loki falling in love with a human seems a little far fetched to me. It's hard for me to believe that he would take notice of someone when humans just all look the same in his eyes.

    I'll see if i still have it because my cousin went through my crap and deleted some of my prewrites haha I'll send you what I have in a minute.
    July 26th, 2012 at 07:04am
  • teenagedream91

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    haha going with the flow, nice! Letting him talk is much better than sounding like a crazy fan girl which would throw him off a bit. I see, well a lot of people here in L.A. say it's a far drive which it isn't. Four hours is nothing, they just arent used to being in the car for that long.

    They are stuck on Loki and I love Loki myself I just find it funny that everyone says that Loki is the unloved brother when it comes to fans, Thor is haha.

    Sure! I would love some pointers! I have the layout and page set up for my story, just need help with how he talks.
    July 26th, 2012 at 05:42am
  • Albluerose

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    Thanks. I would have no idea how to start it lol
    July 25th, 2012 at 11:23pm
  • teenagedream91

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    Pity there aren't any stories about him. I tried, but I always get stuck
    July 25th, 2012 at 07:22am
  • teenagedream91

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    Wow well at you got to go to his room haha now that is something I wouldn't do. I don't think I would have the guts to do something like that. The only reason why I have been there so many times is because I live four hours away from Vegas so it's not really a drive. I'm so used to road trips so four hours is nothing.

    Even if it my job, I just love commenting on stories that need some recognition, it deserves praise and who cares if you used a thesaurus because it still takes skill to form it into a sentence and make it flow. So still kudos to you, girl. You did a fantastic job. I find Thor one-shot the most amusing because you can do so much when it comes to a human girl showing him the wonderful world of technology haha
    July 25th, 2012 at 07:22am
  • teenagedream91

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    I've been there plenty of times, but this is the first time I am legal to do things so there is a lot more to do haha. It was awesome and I stayed in Caesar's Palace in the Octavius tower which is the newest one and the view was absolutely amazing. I love Vegas more now since I can do whatever haha
    July 25th, 2012 at 04:24am
  • Albluerose

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    Yeah I know. People need ti give Thor some credit. Lol

    Yay!!

    I try to have a good selection of stories. :)
    July 25th, 2012 at 03:16am
  • teenagedream91

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    Yep, I did haha glad to see some people pay attention to what I write
    July 25th, 2012 at 03:12am
  • Albluerose

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    Lol. So I just looked to see if there's any Thor stories. I put in Thor and it was all Loki coming up -.- I just started a Jackson from teen wolf storie. I also have some Damon. And draco and Stiles/Derek.
    July 25th, 2012 at 03:07am