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Attention in general makes me feel very awkward, like for birthdays when they sing to me oh god, it's the worst haha and when I just celebrated my 21st and we were at a restaurant one of my friends asked the waiter to sing for us and he gladly did. He got down on one knee and belted out the Happy Birthday too, if I wasn't so dark you can definitely see I was blushing lol I don't get it either, I guess because of their physical appearance it lures guys in and they don't care as long as they get what they want from their girlfriends they don't complain, but I do hear a lot of stories from my boys about their significant other and I just shake my head telling them that appearance isn't always anything, God made them that beautiful to cover up all the crazy lol

No that doesn't sound weird at all. I get tons of compliments when I tell people my heritage and they say that black/mexican babies are the cutest things ever. Whenever I see a white baby though most of the time they look like martians lol no offense to them, but some of them are just wow, but they blossom just fine. That is so weird how they are coming up with 'new' trends when it has been here for years, they just recently think it's in since so many celebrities are wearing outside of the 'norm'.

Okay, well then I know I am doing good so far then haha I am excited too and so happy to see that you enjoyed it. I love helping out with a story and seeing it come to life, but usually the person doesn't come through and never starts the story which bums me out.

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I KNOW IT IS! Because your birfday is the seventh. :D but it's been the same here, work, sleep, hang out with boyfriend, sleep. ect. It's shitty as fuck.

Negative attention is what I dread, any kind of attention I feel really bashful haha, but the negative type I just get annoyed and feel like telling them to mind their own business. No, guys hate that shit, no guy would put up with all the drama girls crave for. Drop their ass in a heart beat. Guys are simple and want as little as drama in their life as possible. Who doesn't? I don't know how it's fun either since someone is getting hurt by it.

They do and I have a few orphan cousins and they all told me they felt a little out of place growing up since they looked so much different, but then when they saw me and my brothers they pushed it aside since we look nothing like our family. haha I'm half black and mexican, so we look like orphan kids too. I have no idea, he probably felt horrible since Laufey or however you spell his name was ashamed of Loki since Frost Giants are tall and bulky while Loki was so tiny when he was born so he fit in with the Asgardians height wise. I keep them in my head too unless I am around one of my geekier friends and we get the jokes that we banter on about haha so funny when people look at us oddly when we say things that sound like another language. No, mostly you get beat up for being such a nerd when I think it's just this stereotype that you are weird to like something of that nature. I don't find it odd at all, once the movies started to become popular I know people have become a little more open about nerds, I heard nerds are the new in thing or something like that haha

I was thinking the same thing, so I put Talen in this white room like Thor was in when they captured him, it will be durable enough to sustain Talen if she did go berserk. True, there has to be some kind of thing that would sustain someone like her and since they had no idea what she does yet, they are in the dark about it.

Btw, I don't mind your long comments, I actually enjoy them since it gives me tidbits here and there about what I should do next :)

It is and twisting it to make it their own so they get sympathy, it's like really people? You are that pathetic to make it your own so you have the attention for a little while? Obviously their hobbies are snooping in on people so they can gossip, one thing that I don't like about girls is that most of them live for that shit and spread it around so the drama can prolong itself and take a life on its own.

Odin is boss haha down right G. To think that taking Loki into his home wouldn't bite him in the ass someday and keeping the secret that he was adopted? I mean come on, usually foster kids have this feeling that they don't have that sense of belonging as they get older and piece everything together. haha Odin must be so proud of Loki, for trying to take over the universe and all, well he is one of the favorable villains of all time, so kudos to Odin for screwing Loki up or helping him anyways XD I'm pretty glad that I lost my geekiness well for the most part, I do research now when I write about comic book related things so I have some sense of what certain superheros or villains do. At least you don't spew out random facts about comic book related stuff, I used to do that when I was younger and I know a few people that still do it now.

lmfao that would be epic! Fury will be coming in the next chapter and I was thinking more of a kidnapping sort of thing since Fury doesn't know a lot about her or what she is capable of. Would it be more logical to have Talen tied to a chair or some kind of chamber?

No, i get you. To see into Talen's thoughts are way interesting since she is so soft spoken and wouldn't speak how she really feels. She is notorious for keeping her true feelings to herself, if they are romantic or defy what others are thinking. I will gladly add some more of Talen's thoughts into the story. :) Hopefully I can get a chapter up tomorrow, been a bit busy to update daily XD

People like invading other people's bubbles since their own isn't as fulfilling as someone else's. I hate that most people live for other people's drama and they try to make the issue bigger than it actually is. It is the most annoying thing and I just looked at them wondering why they had to spend so much time listening in on my drama that was fixed in a day or so, but they got a kick out of it? It's really fucked up how people love to see people being kicked to the ground by their own problems.

I have no idea how to pronounce that name haha She is a lunatic for being with someone like him and she's Asgardian, she was betrothed to someone else, but Loki killed him I think and disguised himself as the man she was going to marry, when Odin finally made it official, Loki revealed himself and Odin was more than pissed and appointed Sigyn the goddess of fidelity. Oh I was crazy obsessed with Storm when I was little, I thought her snow white hair was the coolest thing ever aside from her weather manipulation powers. Don't worry, I was a nerd along with you haha I knew every superhero and villain and what went with who and all that crazy stuff, not so much anymore

Thanks for the comment and I didn't think of that. Maybe writing more of Talen's personal thoughts should be apart of the story more. You can see that I did take some of your examples and might add more later, I think adding flashbacks here and there could really get the story going. I was so nervous that Thor's and Talen's dialogue was forced XD I kept rereading it and making sure that it was perfect.

People are so difficult to deal with, it disgust me how they don't have the decency to give someone their space. People need to know everything that is going on and if it's not interesting, then they turn away. No, they don't. I remember spilling my guts to a friend of mine about guy trouble and these group of girls that was sitting next to us leaned in closer to hear what i was saying. I was like you don't even know me and you want to get your fill on drama? Wow, that is really sad.

Yep, he does have a wifey and yeah she does. She helps him in any way that she can, Loki is the mastermind behind everything while his wife Sigyn, follows through and makes sure everything goes to according to plan. No worries, I am a bit hazy on comic books since I haven't read them since I was a child.

I wouldn't just sit there while everyone stared at me. People most likely don't know what is going on so they continue to stare until it stops. Human nature not to ignore something as obvious as that, usually I just give that person space and face the other way so they can compose themselves, but yeah there are people that are freaking rude and just stare openly at the person who is having a hard time controlling their movements and actions.

lmfao, probably. He would think that the walls were making the waterfall or whale noises XD but he is an adorable oaf! Anyone that hangs out with someone as huge as Thor needs one of those tranquilizer to put him down if needed, maybe use a taser gun just in case, for back up. Marvel universe Loki, i don't see him with anyone either, but I have read that he does have a wife and she is a bit crazy too haha other than her, I don't see him with anyone else.

chapter 2 is up!

I haven't seen anything strange yet, but yeah she should have walked out of the classroom to get some fresh air. Being cooped up in a classroom can feel more suffocating, that's what my friend felt like when she had her attack in class. It must have been and people just love to stare and make assumptions of what is happening which is really rude, but that's how people are.

haha Thor will be like Godzilla at that moment, destroying everything in his path. I wonder what would happen if you gave him those of those relaxation tapes with sounds of a waterfall or a whale, he probably be pretty confused XD makes me laugh just thinking about it. I hear ya, he may be a simpleton and loves smashing things, but he is the one that I can see myself cuddling with, Loki on the other hand. I think that's nearly impossible and he would probably zap my ass with magic lol. You have to be completely mental in order to be with Loki, I don't see any other way.

Thanks for the comment and usually I do separate it, idk why I didn't haha thanks though I'll change it right now. I have no idea why I made Talen so reserved, it just came out that way. I was so nervous about Thor's dialogue, despite it only being a few sentences here and there XD I'm on it, writing the second chapter as we speak

Finally posted the first chapter of Gentle Heart, hope you like it.

I haven't seen anything strange yet, but yeah she should have walked out of the classroom to get some fresh air. Being cooped up in a classroom can feel more suffocating, that's what my friend felt like when she had her attack in class. It must have been and people just love to stare and make assumptions of what is happening which is really rude, but that's how people are.

haha Thor will be like Godzilla at that moment, destroying everything in his path. I wonder what would happen if you gave him those of those relaxation tapes with sounds of a waterfall or a whale, he probably be pretty confused XD makes me laugh just thinking about it. I hear ya, he may be a simpleton and loves smashing things, but he is the one that I can see myself cuddling with, Loki on the other hand. I think that's nearly impossible and he would probably zap my ass with magic lol. You have to be completely mental in order to be with Loki, I don't see any other way.

Alright, I'll try it out. I just had a busy day and won't be off work for the next couple of hours. I know I should be working at the moment, but its pretty slow at the moment haha maybe I can get a few pages done...

Lol thanks xD and yeah I am :)

Hi! :) Since you seem to be pretty excited about my story, I just wanted to let you know that I rewrote the second chapter. The plot has changed quite a bit, but you'll only see a few important changes in chapter two. I added a few extra details to chapter one, but nothing big. This was just due to some helpful constructive criticism I received to help improve my story. Thanks! :)

Ah. I needed braces, but I honestly didn't want them..I don't know. I have this phobia, I guess, of metal on my teeth and in my mouth. Agh. I can't eat with meal silverware. Aha, I'm weird.

I don't mind being "pretty bitchin'" . And, yes, indeed a friendship is in order.

My name is Ione!

It was terrible and thankfully I know how to do that now so I don't have to rush her to the hospital every time it happens. Man, one time it happened in class...everyone was freaking out and I just had to jump in and make sure she took the pills that she refused to take. God, she can be so stubborn and what a horrible feeling! I would keep those pills close to me, I wouldnt' want to feel that way for too long.

I don't know why I find myself laughing at the mere thought of Thor throwing people's cars out of the way so he has a clear path. Imagine if he was stuck in traffic? L.A. or New York type of traffic, oh man, that would be the worst. Loki's wife wouldn't be the typical trophy wife, she would be like the evil godmother, probably loves to torture and do stupid things like hanging your cat on your porch for fun

She does, she wanted to play a game on my computer and she went through my files to try to find it and she deleted it by accident. She was near tears when i saw what she was doing, but I told her it wasn't a big deal and next time to wait for me to find it instead of going through my stuff. Our crazy brainstorm session will hopefully become great results within the story. Crossing fingers it comes out great, oh btw how you do manage to write Thor's dialogue? XD

He's still adorable in my eyes, but my god he was such a beautiful puppy. I had people all over him whenever they come over or when I took him for walks. Yeah, he's a Bernese.

I've put a lot of thought into it, and had been hoping to submit something by the end of the summer. I don't think I'm quite ready for a book yet, but I know of a few publishers that are accepting submissions for chapbooks, and I also get weekly updates emailed to me about anthologies and magazines that are accepting submissions. Unfortunately, a lot of them have fairly specific themes that none of my poems quite fit, haha. But thank you so much, it really means a lot to me that you feel my work is publishable. =) It's a little extra motivation to get my rear in gear to actually make it happen.