ScubaGirl / Comments

Haha yeah, it's kida weird. It goes preschool, kindergarten, then grades 1-12. So there like fourteen years of school, pretty much. hope that helped a little bit :P

Thanks! I really hope I get back to it too! I don't really remember the whole st up of my old school or how they ran things because it was a when I was in second grade. And I'm in nineth now... I dont know much about the last school I went to because I was only there for a year.

I never did any dance award things.
I just took the classes and did the recitals. I wasnt that into it after my friend wasnt in my class anymore so I didnt really pay attention to anything but getting the class done.

I never did pointe. I've been doing the ballet, tap, and jazz combo since I was three. I tried lyrical but I really didnt like it that much. My best friend was in my dance class for six years, but then we were put in different classes and that's around the time I was gonna start to stop, but I kept doing it for a few more years. It's just funner with friends!

Yeah, I'm really excited to start doing it for gym class. My friends are doing it to, which just makes it better and easier to get into again.

Thanks! I used to do ballet but I moved too far away from my old dance studio and then my new one closed. I did ballet, tap, and jazz for about eight years. I'm taking a dance class in gym at school next year, so hopefully I'll pick it up again! Do you do ballet?

I posted a new song just now

aha no i acutally understand what you're talking about. (:
i used to call things primary school and secondary school and ppl would be like wtf.? so I stopped saying it but I understand. (:

You're welcome.! (:
Sometimes its easier to have someone else read it and help correct grammatical errors, I learned that from an author I met in fifth grade. I don't remember the author or any books she wrote but I remember her telling me that.

aha yea, I'm just slow today...really the past few weeks. But great story not as confusing as i orginally thought. I'm sorry about that. aha.

I am so sorry rereading most of it i realized who the characters were. I"m guessing I"m just really slow at catching on to things. After rereading it it made much more sense and wasn't confusing. It's brilliantly written and I don't really have any complaints anymore. I'm sorry if I'm not the best help to you about the story.

(I'm a really slow reader) The biggest confusion thing that I have while reading is in the alone chapter. I don't quite understand who the guy is jason was talking to. I may not be the best one for this job becaause It took my 112 pages to realize calipurnia in how to kill a mockingbird is black. so it may just be i'm getting confused because I'm just slow but you're welcome. I'll deffinately work on my explination a bit more on the confusing parts of your story.!

I don't :P
And I know what you mean taht fog can be creepy. Bad things happen when fog rolls in on movies... :(

I'm sorry that you're having family issues and exam stuff & family issues really should NEVEr mix.! I hope htings get much beter for you. Usually I don't say things just to be mean, however I will admit I do sometimes, but only if I strongly dislike the person or if I am extremely annoyed, which still isn't a good reason but when it comes to criticizing someone's work i won't say something just to be mean even if I am disliking them for some reason. aha. Yea just give me a few minutes so I can find them again and try to come up with a way to describe how they were confusing. (:

You're welcome girl! And watching fog sounds interesting

You're not bugging me at all. Mibba is a site for creative writing.! (: Aha so really we're FINALLY talking about what we're suppose to on here.! >.<
Well that's amazing that you created something that well written at only fourteen.! O :
If you ever want an ubiased opinion on something I"ll give you one. Though sometimes I'm a bit to blunt and hurt people's feelings.

Yeah... O.O Haha. Odd moods are good. I usually find myself in one.

It's pretty believable in places it's a bit maybe it is maybe it isn't but it's still really good. Aha, an authors note would be helpful. But I did catch it that it was chaing p.o.v but still got confused.

My friends ALWAYS have dirty minds. Haha. With them, it never stops.
People want romance because it's usually a happy thing. Lol.

I'm sorry about your sunburn I hope it heals soon.
I hope you had a great time other than the sunburn though>!

and to your story i found it a bit confusing when it switched points of view but the characters seem well written. Unlike in some stories the characters all seem the same. I think that overall your story is written really well. (: