thanks for the story comment; i really appreciate it! yes, jack is one salty motherfucker right now, haha. i think i'll update again one more time before my flight :)
I'm debating bringing him back for the sole purpose of being able to write the scene where he gets the living shit kicked out of him. Even as the author I'm just like. No. You need to feel my wrath. Haha.
The whole time I was writing that part I was just like. Omg. I hate my life. I want to kill James. But then Jack came back! But I still hate James. Haha. Thanks for commenting <3
ok so im not the only one that thought she was being a bitch. i was like, are you seriously going to bitch about me making the twins related to matt? im try not to be rude to people and i try to take criticism well, but that bitch needs to back the fuck off. ITS A FUCKING STORY. i left her a nice little comment on her page so i'm waiting to see what she has to say back. sorry about my rant! hahaha
thank you for the comment :)
im glad that you understand the dynamics of siblings and all that stuff. one of the previous comments really pissed me off, but your made me feel better :)
Very true, and I'm glad that the first chapter didn't disappoint you =) I'll get more up as soon as I get it written. And don't worry, he's back in the next one.
Thank you doll, I'm glad that you liked the ending, and that it didn't disappoint you. I have finals coming this week, so I'm going to have to study for them, but I'm going to try to get the 1st chapter up of the sequel as soon as I can!
That makes me happy to know that his p.o.v. wasn't tragically bad. I was so scared that it wasn't going to turn out good and that it would suck, so hearing you approve is a relief. And yes, she let go of the rail, but no, nothing bad will happen. I had to end it there, otherwise it would have been a super long chapter... but no, he shows up and saves her, no worries.