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I'd never leave you, you write about Ville and have Morissey on your profile ;]
'Twas okayish. I was ill all the way through it though. What about yours? <3

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-Katie

We had a lot of snow in KY too, lmao.
It's melting away slowly though.
Which is making me sad,
because I love the snow.<3 Haha.

My holidays are going great(:
Hows yours going?

LOL... I guess I was... I'm so stupid sometimes..sorry ")

Hey,
I know! He's the BEST! I love him, haha.
I'm Manda(:

WHAT!!!!!! LOL sorry I guess I'm little stupid...thanks for clearing

Yeah, I sort of understand what you mean haha >.< Thanks for telling me what you thought and why :]

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-Katie

Thanks so much for the comments, and the honesty. I'm not a huge fan of lyrics in chapters either, but the lyrics were meant to give an insight into her personality. Also, thank you for the criticism, I appreciate it. I'm a little disappointed with myself though, haha. Could you maybe elaborate what I wrote to make it seem 'forced'? Or the way i wrote it? Oh, and if you 'shakily talk', then your voice wavers when you speak. :]

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-Katie

Oh god, I LUIRVE Aerosmith. I actually got to see them at Download festival this year! XD

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-Katie

...aaand there's another chapter. But it's ver ver short. :3

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-Katie

That's alright, long replies are the best >.<
And yeah, I sorta got the big rock legend called TYLER lol, but I didn't want to say my suspiscions in case that wasn't who it was at all XD
Yeah, it all came across perfectly. You have a real knack with writing, you manage to get Zoes' POV across perfectly, but you also hint at things. Like with the 'dream'. Was it really a dream, or did be just leave her in the morning? You always keep me guessing :3
By the way, if you're interested, I've just finished the third chapter to 'Nice and Content'. It's a bit crap, but I'd really like your feedback on it, especially as you can be critical when you comment, as opposed *some* people who just write; 'loved it, update soon!' That can get quite annoying. XD
I sometimes feel like that's what I do when I comment on your story, so I'm sorry. I try to make it as interesting as possible but because there's hardly anything wrong with the story, I just can't write criticsm. :D
The third chapter should be up in around ten minutes by the way ;]

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-Katie

Hey thanks, your's isn't too shabby either. :D

No, not at all. I actually thought that my comment was pretty lame. :D

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-Katie

Haha, it's my pleasure. That last chapter was one of the best chapters I've ever read, so... :D

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-Katie <3

Hey, i hope you dont mind. I put a link to one of your stories and your profile in my profile x

What?! Polyvore? Now I'M confuzzled. I'll have a lookk and then probably get it ;]

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-Katie

Really? AWESOME! I'ma check that out right now. =D Thanks for lettin g me know. =D

Ugh, I totally sympathise with you. I fucking hate maths. I'm struggling so badly with a higher GCSE XD
But I'm okay, thank you xox

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-Katie

Hey up me darling, how's things?x

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-Katie

Aha! Thanks for the review!

I know, the prophecy is a bit off. But It'll be explained why it's so out there in the next couple of chapters. Elle is going to be a little more important than we think at the moment :)

And don't worry! I <3 snape too much to keep Elle hating him! But right now, he's still at the point where everyone just kind of thinks he's an asshole. Elle knows what's really going on, and I think once she gets her bearings on everything else she'll start to realize that.

Thanks so much, and I'm glad you like it!