abbythebollix / Comments

yeah, it's def. the belief of the individual here. I think the only real deep seeded community sense that I've learned about here, is the deaf culture, but thats for another bunch of reasons all together. Have to say though, sense of community sense a hell of a lot better then individual. (BTW, sorry if I'm not making sense, it's 630 am here and i haven't slept lol)

I'd never heard of that rule before, it's really interesting!!

I don't think it's self-absorbed at all, i think it's one of those things where you write it and when you feel the feeling attached to it, you hope others feel the same way. Sometimes, when I'm writing something and i giggle at a line i find pathetically hilarious i hope others find it as funny as i do. lol

lol, i know what you mean, i have a few lines in my own story that make me all gooey :P It's a good feeling hehehe

Yeah I totally get that you're not being mean about it, just trying to help, which I appreciate. Well I do watch a lot of TV with adults, but I guess it just doesn't get conveyed as well. Who knows lol.

Thanks again for commenting and doing some constructive criticism. I do see what you mean with your last comment. I guess it's hard for me to write over 20 years ahead of my time, you know? I'm not too sure how men think at that age lol.

Thanks so much for your comment on Gold Stars!
It's great to hear some thoughts on the story.
Her friends are all a bit two-dimensional for now, but I do plan to give you more of an insight to them as the story progresses, and I originally did have Ville written the way he usually sounds, but he didn't seem enough like a teacher, if you know what mean, so I decided to give him those moments classroom formality.
Anyway, thanks again, and keep reading!

Yeah, we break up today as well for a week, so that's all good. Although no holidays for me ;]

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-Katie

'Tis nice indeedy.
Anyhoo, how're you getting on then? :]

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-Katie

Yeah, and literally NO-ONE in England has ever said such an eloquent word. But I'll shut up about it now, haha. I can see where you're coming from about the thing at the end of each chapter, but for me, part of the enjoyment of your writing is the fact that you can work things out and watch the plot unravel. But that's just my personal view.

And yeah, I'll give you Jim Morrison, but I somehow doubt it'll turn out that she's married to him... :DD

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-Katie
P.S- I enjoy our somewhat intelligent but mainly ridiculous conversations ;)

What can I say, msn gives me notices if I'm online XD
And I've just realised that I actually used the word 'sassy'. Can I just verify that I've never, and will never use it in my dictionary again? i have no idea what came over me. PLEASE don't think I'm one of those people that uses the word 'sass' on a regular basis. Or any basis at all ;D
And yeah, you did an excellent job with Steven. I really think that you got it spot on, I was interested enough to sort of want to know a little bit, but I don't even like Steven. [I know, I know. I'm a bad person ;)]

Aaaah. Clever you, yet again. You infuriate me with your subtle clues and hints :)
Why not? Jim's a crap name. But I'll let it slide :3
Abby, you're the best <3 xo

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-Katie

oh, of course! you write brilliantly! )

Well thank you, you're cool too! :P

Yeah, sorry, no Skype. But I'm online on msn and I've added yous :3

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-Katie

That's... suprising. I'm looking forawrd to that now.. I think. ;)
Anyhoo. FIVE TO TEN!? Grawr. I can't really complain lool. Oh, and 'In Venere..' is amazing! And if it doesn't match up to some of the other stuff you've written, the other stuff must be fucking amazing.
You're right. Comment conversations ARE annoying. Add me ;P

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-Katie

hmm, I don't know to be honest. I guess I realised it was crap a while ago, so I haven't really felt inspired to write any more chapters. I haven't given up on it, I hate people that do that, but it might be a while. And I completely see where you're coming from about Zoe's mixed emotions. I'm guessing i speak for a whole lotta people when I say that I'd quite like to find out a wee bit more about Zoe's husband, but judging by your cryptic-ness, I'm guessing that isn't going to happen any time soon ;D

And yes, I do chicken. It's the tres-imaginative name of 'KT4HIMx@hotmail.co.uk'.

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-Katie

You better, you just broke my heart ;D

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-Katie

I do love youuuu ;]
Reading the chapter now. Love meeeeeee <3

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-Katie

Thanks for the preview, it sounds amazing. I love the fact that you haven't written these scenes typically, if it was anyone else the problem would have been over and sorted by now. And I like the fact that you've described various parts of the situation from several people, it gives us a lot more to think about and makes it a hell of a lot more interesting.

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-Katie

It's fine :]
I can't wait! I was gonna turn off the compooper seen as NO-ONE is messaging me on any site I'm on, but I think I'll stay on for a wee bit longer now >.< Oh, and the new chapter sounds amazing, haha. Can't wait to see how much drama/awkwardness/emotion is in it XD

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-Katie