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Thank you so much for the comment on I Let You Down! Your comment made my day.

Hello. I hope you'd take some time to check out a new story of mine. Thank you! ^^ http://stories.mibba.com/read/451181/Beginning-of-Something/

hi love! thank-you a million for the comment :) x

Yay! Thanks for the comment :)

Hey. Can you check my One Direction fanfiction if you can? I mean if you have time? Happy New Year by the way! :)

I updated 'Up All Night'! It may be my last update before I go overseas in a week, but I'll try to update at least once before I go!

Hey, thanks for the comment on 'Up All Night', I really appreciate it :)

I checked out your story "How I Met Him."
and I really like it (: you're a wonderful writer.
If you have the chance you should check out my stories,
and give me some advice on how to make them better,
Could always use the criticism, thank you. (:

I am not offended at all. I'm pretty glad because well it is indeed true.
In all honesty, I knew about the many Grammatical errors; but sadly and shitty of me, I'm toooo lazy to fix it. But as for the rest, its my style of how I write. Its like a John Steinbeck sort of style. Where he gives very little emotion/situation at times and has YOU make it up on your own in a way. So I will indeed have "useless paragraphs". It's just a different way I write. But the grammar errors are indeed chaotic and just fucked up. And I thank you for taking the time to point it out, because otherwise I would continue to be a lazy fuck and not fix them (mind my language). So I will sometime fix them as much as possible or as long as my will, will let me. And yes, the story may seem "Stereotypical" at times but its what came to mind. Though this story will become a twist at some point, I'm just doing it at my own speed. But now that I think about it, I should take my writing more seriously. Its why I'm here right? Right. So thank you for pointing it out. By the way, I do understand the difference between "You're" and "Your" but again, I'm either too lazy or my cellphone doesn't always agree with me (It chooses to fix itself); spell check is a hassle on a mobile device. Thank you again for the feedback, it was nice of you to take the time to point out the flaws. And I'm sorry for making myself seem like a "shitty-doesn't-know-what-shes-writing-about" writer. Thank you again.

They'll be there soon.

Thanks for commenting on Gorgeous Nightmare. As for chapter length, all chapters for the Ugly Duckling/Gorgeous Nightmare stories are blunt and straight to the point. Short chapters are what I am aiming for, because they leave people wondering until the next update. Usually for these two stories of mine, longer chapters upset the readers. Thank you anyway, though :)

if you were intending that to be a sarcastic remark, then i'm not bovvered by your opinion.

Haha, what do you need explained?
And thanks for the comment!

The next chapter is longer! I promise!
Thanks for commenting!!!

Hey, I'm the author of the Burning Edge and it's sequel. If I came up with another sequel to If You Can't Live Without Me, would you read it? I'm just asking before I plan it out and then nobody reads it. Thanks. :)

Oh thank you so much. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I love writing it

thanks for the story comment (:

Thanks I'll get right on it.

Thank you so much for my story comment.
You're right about Aiden being emo/scene.
I'd completely forgotten that I'd written that.
In the beginning I didn't plan on making Shane a vampire.
Do you think that I should change the picture or re-write Aiden's looks?

Thnaks so much,
EvilMonique
xxx

I realized that after I typed it, but it was still longer than the last one. lol