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  • Pop Goes the Secret

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    How you doing?
    June 26th, 2010 at 01:57am
  • ScreamOutMyName!

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    Nothing much, i'm tired T-T
    yooouu?
    June 26th, 2010 at 01:54am
  • the redhead's cho

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    No problem! my brother had me read it and I really liked it!
    June 26th, 2010 at 01:32am
  • Annie_Weasley

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    No problem it was so intense and sad.
    June 26th, 2010 at 01:02am
  • Hagosha

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    K thanks! =D
    I totally understand that! lol XP
    June 26th, 2010 at 12:33am
  • SourNomCase

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    welcomes :) and thankies n_n
    June 25th, 2010 at 10:55pm
  • AddictiveAriel

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    Sweetness. Must be tired
    June 25th, 2010 at 10:27pm
  • F0REVER.L0VE

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    I know how that is. Lol.
    June 25th, 2010 at 10:17pm
  • ScreamOutMyName!

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    Yeeaahh.. i wanna read it again(': <3
    June 25th, 2010 at 09:57pm
  • Hands-off-fool

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    hahaha, really? i just got back so now i have to watch my little brother and his friends too! but i got some help comin over(:
    June 25th, 2010 at 09:52pm
  • xxHayely Lockxx

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    Well, I like your story :) Have you read mine? What do you think about it?
    June 25th, 2010 at 09:21pm
  • F0REVER.L0VE

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    Not too much, you? I only read a little of your story, but so far it seems like it should be good. =]
    June 25th, 2010 at 09:10pm
  • SourNomCase

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    lol yeah suree :) want to try reading mine? it's called Gothic Boys yeh. please + thankies :3
    June 25th, 2010 at 08:16pm
  • m3g

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    Thank you very much!
    June 25th, 2010 at 08:10pm
  • Hagosha

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    hahaha! It's good stuff! =D
    lol
    Now, you should do me a favor and read my story. =)
    June 25th, 2010 at 08:08pm
  • kissAsphyxiation

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    Absolutely, if you give me a review for Wicked Scar. ;]
    June 25th, 2010 at 08:07pm
  • m3g

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    (: I don't know if it'd be asking too much, but do you mind reading mine as well? I'm working on the next chapter and some feedback is mucho needed.
    June 25th, 2010 at 08:04pm
  • m3g

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    No, no, no. I like the sequence of events so far. Maybe in the future because she is blind now and the abuse is the last thing she remembers, maybe include flashbacks to add to the anxiety and insomnia.
    June 25th, 2010 at 07:59pm
  • m3g

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    To be honest, I like where the story is going. I had low expectations for it because I figure it was another woe-is-me-emo-girl-sad-story, you know? But I was suprised by the end of the second chapter. I don't think you should change it, but see what you can do with what you've written so far.
    June 25th, 2010 at 07:54pm
  • m3g

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    I read it(:
    June 25th, 2010 at 07:46pm