August 24th, 2012 at 07:13pm
Thanks for commenting. (:
But, when I wrote that story I was maybe 14 or 15.
So - I did a lot of incorrect writing in my younger days.
It was just my style.
I'm 17, now. So, I'm on a more mature level.
I'm just letting you know, it's posted :3
http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/483058/Disenchanted/
I'd also like to say thanks for sticking with Awake and Unafraid, it means so much more than I could ever say :)