DarkAngel666 / Comments

Thanks for the story comment :)
I'm slowly getting there, & i love your new chapter

You are welcome! I look forward to the next update!!!!!! XD

Hey thanks for the welcome, sorry the reply is so late. I really liked Love Hangover, the storyline was interesting. I'll check out your other stories too. xxx

:O
Not fair ! I'm going to be thinking of all the possible things ever now XD

Gah !! Secret is going to drive me c r a z y !!
Jamie Jamie Jamie !!!

J A M I E' J A M I E' J A M I E ;]
hahaha XD dont be get me excited !
& i recently got a new laptop & tried transferring my stories but it'll take awhile ;'(
Sorry

Thanks for the warm welcome!!

Homework is a good thing I guess. But when there's too much from different subjects & you have to stay up late to finish it all I say BAD! d: haha

thanks for the story comment :)
btw, i luuuuurve your picture. Gerard Way is so fabulously sexy hahaha lol

Damn ! That's coool :D
& no. Babysit my cousins. All still in little babies.

Haha i'll try my best :]
& what do you teach ? I know how you feel. With school i have my cousins to watch then practice... School? Getting good grades (: & it's not so bad. Getting used to highschool XD

Thanks :]
So how's college treating you? haha & don't worry, i've been slowly working on chapters & just trying to find out which ideas fit with each other. (:

Heey :]
& i know -__-.' Everything is just so overwhelming. I've been keeping up my grades & drama. & idk i've tried many times to continue the chapters but nothing is really clicking ''/

-How are you though ?

Lifes a busy place all we can do is try to keep up ^^
ill try not to get distracted, and thanks for liking my story, your love of it is well appreciated :D

Thanks ^^ Ill try to update soon
if i dont get distracted by school, games, cookies, etc Lol

Psh! You write the BEST damn cute sex stories! Say proud woman and dont you forget it!
I like to read a bit of everything as long as the writing is not horrible. The only thing I will NEVER read are Justin Bieber, Jonas Brother and well Disney star related fan-fics. And incest...I draw the line at incest.

Thanks :)

OK, I am just throwing this out there. But you know how on Mibba there are certain main ideas that you will find stories about, right?
In the fan fics area:
You have pretty much AX7, BMTH, All Time Low, MCR and Hollywood Undead, frikin Justin Bieber end the damn Jonas brothers for Music.
For books you have a lot of Harry Potter and, of course, Twilight.
And in sports you have a few ones about soccer but an obscene amount of Hockey player ones. Specially about Sidney Crosby. Oh, and a few that do some extreme sport or another.
And when you see story plots what you see the most is: Slash, regular, Student teacher and/or vampire/human romance.
As for spicing up the stories you will find a sprinkling of bad boys, emos, princes, arranged marriages, vampires, werewolves, people with fucked up pasts, rape, pregnancy and sex that could make a porn star blush.
Now taking all the above into account you will find yourself with hundreds of odd stories that combine one two or even eight of those aspects, yet the story lines are pretty much the same.
Here are a few thing I have not seen stories written about but would totally crack me up if I did:
- A hockey fan-fic that was a slash. I mean really, with all the slashes going around you would think someone would have made hockey player gay by now.
- A story with an ugly vampire as the hero. Seriously, why are they always total hotties? Ugly people get bitten to you know!
- A band fan-fic where they DONT get the girl/boy and they have to suck it up like the rest of the none famous world. (this one just be my bitterness talking cuz I know I will never have a famous singer in my bed)
-An arranged marriage where the do not end up happy and in love at the end...seriously. Who would really end up like that now-a-days?

But that is just me...
If anyone has actually seen something like any of those, please pass me the link. It should be an interesting read :p

It's not that Nate is being a bad friend, but Devi is just avoiding him. i'll get into more detail later on.

I thought that writing in the third person would widen the view of things but then i kind of ended up writing it in third person in Kia's POV.

I can't say a lot, I don't give the plot away lol If Jess hadn't continuously walked in on them or other things stopping them, then there might not be a game or it might not have lasted so long. They are just perfect playmates, both stubborn and competitive.

I would love to have Kia and Ian 'get it on' lol but as a writer, think everyone wants to torture their characters a bit lol

It's not that Nate, the dude, isn't acknowledging her feelings, it just that she hasn't told him and she's torn b/w telling him or not. I thought i was implying it. This is good, I'll go back and maybe make it clearer.Thank you, this i very much so appreciated. :)

P.S.? lol
I'm guessing you just read though the Game of Seduction recently, right? Any criticism there if it's not a bother? I kind of think that it would flow better if i had written it in the first person. Is the flashbacks confusing in anyways? It's like I'm stating the situation and then going back in time to explain it... is that weird?