Thanks for the story comment :)
I'm working on making them longer, but since this is partially prewritten, it's hard to add on new information. After I get through the prewritten chapters, they'll get longer and hopefully less repetitive. I never noticed that until now xP
And I didn't quite understand your second point.. :(
heyy, do me a small favor and check out my new story, Shanghai Skyscape, please :)
if you dont like it then you dont have to read any further lol thanks!
And thank ya :) Glad you're liking it xD