Ooh, this [i]is[/i] going to br good!
I am currantly enthralled with BBC's 'Sherlock', I love Megamind, Indiana Jones, Star Wars, anything Oscar Wilde, stuff like that.
I also like pandas, candy canes, coffee, and fountain pens ;)
Eh, my birthday is not until late July, but if you feel like it, an early birthday card never hurt.
Unless you reminded someone that their thirty before necessary... Some people are touchy about that. ;]
That's good! I can't believe it doesn't have as many comments as it should. Very different from the other stories I've read on here. A fresh breath of air really.
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It's very intriguing; I personally like this story so far better than The Giver. Though that book was great and taught the readers about the pros and cons of an Utopian society, it really did freak me out.
Your story so far has a theme of nature in it that's very calming, where as the Giver seem to have more of the artificial feel to it...
Hi, I read your comment on my journal about the story title. Thanks for the dvice. I honestly don't know how to aviod mary sues, but thank you for letting me know. I do know I want the title to have imperial in it and one user said I should name it Beauty so that one I am still thinking about, but thanks you so much again for the advice.