I'm so so so glad you like the story. When I was writing about her getting beat up, I was visualizing it in my mind and it was kinda gruesome. Lol. I would love to read your poem if you don't put it online please send it to my email. :)
Thanks you for your comment on "Lies & Broken Smiles" It makes me very happyful =P
As you said xspiritravenx does have a wonderful idea but I'm just not sure how I would do you it you know what I mean? Ugh I suck at explaining things.
Have a great day =D