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Black Rose'97 (100)

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cooool :) what phone? x
Of course i will now :) is it the story you sent me some of? x

July 27th, 2010 at 06:54pm

Black Rose'97 (100)

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Heyy Ehlana :) x

July 26th, 2010 at 06:09pm

the redhead's cho (100)

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I bet, but that doesn't change facts.

July 16th, 2010 at 05:02pm

ItCanOnlyBeKailyn (100)

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Hey :)
I'm Kailyn

July 11th, 2010 at 07:08pm

dear liza (100)

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That's a lot of poems you have! I was looking through the poem section and found about 20 or so of your poems. Instead of commenting individually I just thought I'd post one here ('cause I'm lazy). It's great that you have the inspiration to write so many poems, but in some of them the spelling & grammar is not so good. I think you know that already. Have you tried writing them in a word document or something similar before you post them? It would be very easy & improve your work a lot. Alternatively, you could find a beta-reader to check your stuff for you. Sorry about the long comment. Keep writing! ^.^

July 11th, 2010 at 06:57am