MissCrystal / Comments

Thank you for your criticism. Sometimes I forget that while I know the in-between, my readers do not and sometimes would like to know it. :) In this instance I didn't want to fluff it with chapters that did not pertain to the main story line I wanted. I think the first chapter works better as an introduction. :) thank you again, for being honest.

Thank you for the story comment on The Melody.

Thank you for the comment. What type of grammar errors? The names mean gold and sun and are like that to fit the end of the story. She talks like a child because she is one, yet she is wise beyond her years, especially at the end.

Thank you for the comment, and yes the names are traditional. They mean gold and sun which go with the ending. I'll look at the grammar.

Thanks for the comment. Just to clarify, because you said you didn't like the all-dialogue format, I didn't have a choice to write it any other way. :P This was written to be entered in a dialogue-only contest, where I would have been disqualified even if I'd written, 'he said,' or, 'she slurred'. Which is where some of the other confusion, regarding Izzy's slurring, might have come from? You noted that she only slurred once, because that was the only time I actually left out letters to signify that. Brandon's constant worry of her slurring was supposed to allude to how her vocal clarity was deteriorating; you can pronounce words properly and still slur them, which is what Izzy was doing. Sorry if it seemed confusing in the story, but again, I couldn't explain it. :P It would have been against the rules. Thanks again!

Psh I finished reading 8 and 9 a while ago. WHERE IS 10?

Tsk tsk, I'm on and I do not see a Chapter 8 up *sad face*

I should get going (: Make sure Chapter 8 is up before I check again :P

Did that certain best friend of yours forget me? Or does she miss me?

You have no idea how many of us are out there (:

Pshhhh, you don't know who I am. You haven't found Andrew yettt >_<

Oh and Chapter 5 you wrote “You’re father called". It's supposed to be "your father" (:

So, I kind of really like how that story of yours is coming along (:

Haha, thank you for your comment. c:

Thank you for the story comment!

Thanks for the comment. :)

Heyy! Thank you for commenting on my story =) And thanks a lot for noticing the typo, I changed it, so it fits now =D

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