March 11th, 2011 at 08:15pm
Hey.
Thanks for the comments, sweets.
I guess I forgot to mention that I was posting again haha. :)
But I really appreciate you taking the time to check out my new story.
Hope everything on your end is going well. :)
Have you had any luck thinking up some ideas or are you having too much fun reading?
[i]Not quite sure why, but your descriptions seemed to click pretty well with the overall tone this time around. Not that it doesn't always, but it did particularly well this time.[/i]
Don't worry about offending me, constructive criticism is what it's all about right?
I think what made chapter three work so well was that I wasn't sitting on it as long as I was with the first two chapters. I held onto those for about a month before I posted them and I would just go back and add things. I think I added too much in those chapters. But with chapter three, I think was able to hold myself back a shit ton and not over do any descriptions.
Anyway, thanks for reading and commenting once again, sweets.
I always appreciate your opinion. :)