Loved your advice. I'm editing my story a little right now.
I try to keep people in suspense... Have them start thinking about how things can turn out . There's a reason why I don't go into detail about the characters ;)
heyy haha thanks and no it is rather confusing.
sorry. and i read your story, its different and i like it.
only got up to the third chapter. i have a small attention spand.
but i'll defiantly keep up with it.
and thanks on my sing sweet song story. i need to update soon aha.