Thank you. I will try to work on that better from now on. =]
No you didn't sound harsh and the criticism is welcomed. Im just glad someone is pointing something out I can work on. I cant make it perfect on me own. I dont normally pick out whats wrong with my writing. So thanks =]
Though I think I may look into that. Making it a book. It was never a thought, though you kind of inspired me and have me thinking about it now :]
Anyway thanks so much for the comment! :D
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It sounds pretty good :D [:
I'll see if I can get it... English books are hard and quite expensive to get here sometimes... :/
Ooh! :D I have a Team Edward T-shirt :D :D :D also from Hot Topic :D But my mom doesn't want to buy there anymore cause it cost us quite a lot to get it in Belgium, but it wasn't HT fault, it's the people here that ask extra money :[
Oooh!! :D omg there are so many books I wanna read... :/ But I've got no good books at home and I'm always late for the library, it's always closed when I get there... :/ :{
When you've finished it, can you tell me if you liked it? [:
How're you today?? :] anything new? :] How's school? :D :]
xoxo
heyhey
sorry again for the late reply, but I have to work quite hard for school and I can only come online during the weekends... :/
Yeah, I've heard about Go Ask Alice... is it good? What's it about?
How're you doing? [: anything interesting happened lately? [:
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i can fake sick pretty good but if it's tht close to a weekend or vaca. and if she let me stay home tht weekend or vaca. will suck cause she wont let me do anything haha.
well i have school today and tomorrow. but i have a tooth infection so my dad is makin me stay home cause it's rlly painful. and haha nice nice my mom would have been like "i dont care if ur sick ur going" the only reason she's letting me stay home is cause she knows the pain i'm in.
cool bout the coat. and mhm i hate the storms too (expect rainstorms). and my school is getting out a half day tomorrow cause it's going to start snowin at like 2pm so they leftin us out at 11:30 haha
hullow
sorry for the late reply, laziness, exams and just school
i do believe in vampires :D xD
i'm 1/2 vampire too :D hooray! :D xD
how've you been?? :]
xoxo
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Ello!
No problem I haven't been on much either! lol No haven't seen Twilight yet :*(. But I will soon.Your Half Vampire? Thats soooo cool! I wish I was too! I read ur story its frickin awesome! XD.
Talk to ya later hopefully byez
mhm i know how tht is. but most ppl just talk about edward or jacob. and i saw the necklace alice wears in the movie at hot topic so i might get it haha. since ppl only care bout edward and jacob *rolls eyes* haha
i didnt use they had Alice's shirts i'm sooo going to hottopic to see it lmao but there is sooo many ppl in my school w/ twilight crap i dont wanna buy any twilight crap : [ but maybe for alice lamo
No you didn't sound harsh and the criticism is welcomed. Im just glad someone is pointing something out I can work on. I cant make it perfect on me own. I dont normally pick out whats wrong with my writing. So thanks =]
Though I think I may look into that. Making it a book. It was never a thought, though you kind of inspired me and have me thinking about it now :]
Anyway thanks so much for the comment! :D
xx