thank youu! the critique was very nice haha. and yeah, you can friend me. if you're on the story page and you look at the links in the right hand corner, there's a link that says "Comments" which is where you'd leave a comment :)
they're pretty much changed entirely. I loved the idea for Brimstone & Saints but every time I write it, it fails, so I figured that I had to start completely new in order for a demon story to actually work for me ha