Hey Carly! A lot of the authors of Freeway are dropping out so my question is, are you? If you want to know who's still in it then just drop by the thread. =)
Well, the foreshadowing you had with Brian's cheating absolutely killed me. You never said, CHEATER CHEATER-- but every fiber of the story seemed to accuse him, and when Vi actually said it, instead of BAM, it was a smooth ending to something you'd already introduced.
I was like: Oh, okay, so now I'm POSITIVE he's an asshole. :D
*sighs* I may have been waiting for that my whole life. Thanks so much. It's a breath of relief, to know that somebody reads my words and actually READS them. :]