He doesn't mean to be rude. He just doesn't like that he can't protect her. Big strong guys don't do well being scared. I love him in this story. I'm not so sure about her.
Thank you for the compliment. I am hoping to get enough of that childlike quality he has in the story. I'm not sure I can do his wild-side justice. I will attempt it in a few chapters.
OH ~ well I can fix that. I haven't done much editing on it yet. But, yeah, if you thought her friend was with her then I definately need to fix it. I'll have the next chapter up tomorrow. Still finishing it.
Thanks! But it's not as fast as you might think. It's not like he got her number or anything. Who knows when she might run into him again. Besides, she's a Pens fan! I'm glad you like it.