I made the story summary cliche on purpose, mainly because I couldn't think of a better one at the time, and I'm not very good with summaries xD It's not going to be cliche...or at least I don't think it will be (:
Just stopping by your profile real quick to thank you for your comment. Very encouraging and helpful. I editted the second chapter.. second? yes, second. And described two of the best friends. The other one I haven't found a right spot to describe her, but I'll fit it in there somewhere. Maybe on the next chapter? hmm.. dont know.
The title I'm still working on, though. I was thinking maybe beautifully dangerous, since she describes the aliens that way in the second chapter, and she keeps repeating they're beautiful. But, their is also: fast, which many ppl keep telling me to put that one but I'm not so sure. I'm sure I'll come up with a title as I keep writing.
anyways, thanks for suscribing!! :))
I'm not very good with layouts, I'll be the first to admit. Any suggestions as to how I can improve it?
And he isn't supposed to be as creepy as I may have accidentally made it out to be. It's kind of supposed to show how big cities and their inhabitants are unfamiliar to her. If that makes sense? Haha.