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I love the song "Louder than Thunder" by TDWP (The Devil Wears Prada) XD just a random fact I guess :P

haha will do :)

just to let you know, your poems are amazing. ;o

Your welcome
Just admiring good work
Thank you for swinging by and reading some of my poems

Haha,I am a music junkie...I need to go to rehab.XD

Thanks.

-cough- Thing is....I forgot which one's you told me to read xD

I found it xD haha

LOL... thank you, then.. :D

O.O both of them are sooo freaking goood!!!!!!! :D
L.I.F.E : ohmygosh! so uplifting! it gives you the feeling that, well, LIVING ISNT FREAKIN' EASY! xD and that, yes your life is hard, but so if everyone else's. and that in order for your life to be good, or easier, your gonna have to try! ^_^
Wake Up, Wake Up : oh, oh, oh! i liked this one ALOT! ^o^ it actually flowed with the feeling of a song, in my opinion. its a very motivating poem. like when i finished reading it, i felt the urge to go out and change the world, or do something that i want to do, but am too scared to. XD a poem like this, i feel, could change the world. :D

oh i see, well your writing is really good! keep up the good work :)

THANKIES?! oh my gosh, i love that! ahaha.... =D and your welcome!! ^_^

WOW, WOW, WOW!!! i LOVE it!!!! ^O^ oh my gosh, the rhyming in the beginning is fantastic, and how you just added a few other rhymes the whole way through, but the whole thing didnt rhyme---GENIUS!! :D annndd, the last line.. O.O i was like, "whoa.".. :D its one of your greatest works, in my opinion!!! <3 ^o^

hmm.... *makes a wierd thinking face*...x].. how about a secret love for your best friend? or like a lost friend becuase of your feelings for them...? idk. just throwing these things out there.. xP

yes! he really is an amazing poet... :D

ohh!! i like The Tell Tale Heart... my all time favorite is The Raven, but A Dream Within A Dream and The Valley Of Unrest are in a tie for second.. xP

thanks! :D why wont it let you read it? ;(
and i LOVE Edgar Allan Poe. i had to memorize and perform the whole, "The Raven." for a class.. and it was love at first read... ;P

thanks.! ^_^ not many people sail anymore. most choose to cut through the ocean and wind with motors, instead of moving with it and letting it move you. :) and you were right about how the ocean fits into the poem:D
and (i forgot to add this before) i'm impressed tthat you were able to narrarate and still get your point across in The Love Separation Complex... ;D thats pretty impressive ^o^

oh, oh, oh my good lord! :D ohkay, well, really enjoyed They Said A Storm Was Coming becuase you stuck to the idea of sailing very well and kept it simple, but involved. i sail, btw. ^_^
and i REALLY REALLY REALLY liked The Love Separation Complex. ^O^ it was a little more narrative-like than your others, and i loved it!! :D you showed that you can do the more story-like poems and still keep your deep-ness.. :D
ahahaa... i feel like a literature critic xD ahaha.. teehee XD

ahaha. your very welcome!! :D