oh no problem:) I always feel compelled to comment on the stories I read. feedback is such an important part of writing. And I really love your guys story, It really is amazing, I couldn't stop reading it :)
aw..its okay take ur time..i was just wonderin if it was still active cause theres not that many javeys on mibba and i love davey ^-^ and it makes me happy when ppl start to write javeys