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Thankyou so much for the story comment!! :D

Thank you so much for the wonderful story comment!

Thank you so much for the story comment, Love. =) It's nice to see that posting on A7XFF.com gained me a new reader, because I was seriously starting to consider the point of posting it over there.

I hope you continue to read and enjoy! <3

Thank you so much! It helped a lot. :)

@ paper planes.

I can talk about me, what I like & what I really seek in a story. I never meant to say your prologue was weak, cuz I don't believe it was & I'm sorry if I came across that way, it wasn't my intention. I would really suggest if you could develop a plot outside of the box, that really draws people attention. At least my attention.

I would hate if this story turns out to be another story about a girl trying to find herself & falls in love with the first guy she sets eyes on, or her preschool crush. It would really not peak my interest. Sometimes it's better to develop a story like real life (Even when it's a fanfiction). Not everyone gets the guy that they have been in love all their life & discover that they are in love with them too. Sometimes that gets old.

But with all that said, you just keep your story going. I'm sure you have an idea what you want from it to develop & it's every author pov. What I like might not be what someone else might be looking for. Just stay true to your story & try to develop a bond between the characters. I think that might be my best advice.

As I state before, I can't wait to see how you plan out this to be. Don't make my comment question your judgement or your take on the story. I'm just a reader. You write what you think its best.

& remember, too much background on a character might make you lose perspective on the whole story. Just drop hints here & there & it'll make thing far way more interesting.

Hope I was of help, & not a rock on your path. I think this story can really have potential.

(I'm sorry for my english, it's my second language, so I might be a bit rusty)

Thank you very much for the comment on my prologue. :) I was just wondering if you had any other suggestions about what I should add. I'm not sure if it's more character background or more story development/beginning? Again, thanks!

Haha thank you so much for the comment and the compliment!
I'm glad you're still interested in it after all this time!
I'm actually working on the next one now, should be up sooooon!
Thanks again!!!! :D

Thank you for your comment on my story!

Oh, thank you for the comment on OMMM. I'm so happy you like it. It was honestly the first story I every started and has been rewritten twice already.

I wish I could tell you I will finish it, but I'm not positive if I will or not. I do hope to get back to it again. And it's nice to know I will still have readers interested... :) So, thanks.

your comment was such a pleasant surprise! thank you so much. :)

Oh, thank you for your comment! :)

Thank you for the comment on my one shot We Belong Together. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks for the comment, im glad you like that story :)

Thanks for commenting on "You Won't" it's one of my favorite one-shots that I wrote and I'm more then happy to hear that you enjoyed it.

Thank you so much for your comment on "From Tragedies blooms Miracles"! It was totally unexpected and greatly appreciated. It brightened my day for sure! I'm glad you liked it :)

thanks so much for your comments on my two stories! i really appreciate it :)

Thankyou so much for the story comment!
Glad ya liked it :D

Thank you for the comment :) Glad you enjoyed it.

That's what I think too! It's just like any other stories except..they're not published and happen to be about certain band members or actors. LOL I'm glad you like my story!

Thanks so much for commenting! You'll find out everything soon! Oh and I love the fact that we're the same age btw lol Makes me feel better knowing other women my age like fan fiction as much as I do. Haha