HappyHippo / Comments

Alright, sorry for the confusion. I'll keep an eye out for that.

You need to capitalize your stories, that can be reported.

The chapter titles are Latin numbers in adjective form.

Thanks for the comment on Yours To Hold :) about their appearances; they are all 18 in the story, and the reason I have described them as the way they look today is because their current appearances are what they are recognised as, e.g. Rian's short hair, so it just makes it easier for people to visualise the story...

aww (: hahah yeaah i did too while i was writing it. but thank you for sticking with it!

Thanks so much for the comment! I'll quickly change the background! And yes, that's supposed to be through. :) I wrote very late and I was tired so I didn't even catch it! Thanks :)

xoxo Rae Marie

Wow thanks for the story comment:D
Here's an imaginary cookie.:3
--Kyle(:

Yes I did very much. Not many people give to much advice and suggestions and I'm glad some such as yourself do so I can improve and work on my writing.

Thank you very much for the story comment. I did not know that I am going to fix it.

hello, thanks for the friend request.

Look, thank you for your feed back, but please please please don't tell me how i should write my story. i write it the way i like, because that's how it comes to me. And I'm glad you like it, but I'm not going to change it. And mistakes happen. I'm glad you shared your opinion and I'll admit my writing isn't the best, but its also not the worst. I like my story the way it is, i like how i write and apparently so do others. My sentences may be 'choppy' and my sentences may have some mistakes, but honestly I'm human shit happens. It's my story, not yours, thanks for the feed back, but no thanks. I'll stick to writing my story my way. because it is my story.

That totally makes sense. :) Feedback helps writers grow, if people are like 'hey you're story is good' then what am I gaining from that? lol and when you said my story was sad and fascinating, I was like :O! sweet that's totally how I want it to be xD

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Thank you again for the lovely comment! Haha God bless spell check ehh? But seriously, glad you liked it!

Thanks for the story comment :) Comments like that will definitely keep me writing. :D

Wow. can i just say your comment made my day :) and don't worry, there are still quite a bit of chapters left. Andd for all your questions, you'll have to read and find out :) but keep commenting!

Why thank you. :)

Heey thank you for the stoy comment on Dear God. i was actually suprised by your comment, i always thought Dawn was a bit babyish but guess not :)
hahah yeahh, psh mothers ;)

LOL thank you for liking the story. Ha ha the German thing was all I could think of. I have been to Germany and I rarely saw any blondes. I wanted to put it as the mountain areas in Sweden but Sweden is not the homeland of the pretzel. So I changed it to Germany. That is how I fix problems. I was never good at problem solving. But whatever. Thank you so much for liking it. :)

Thanks for the friend add!
I love your username! Hippos are my favorite animals :D

I'm pretty good :)