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Hey! Thank you so much for your comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

You're very welcome! :3 I'd absolutely love to read some of your other works. With the way you write, I think I'll have my after-work reading cut out for me.

You can definitely PM me whenever you would like and I'll read it for you. :3 I enjoy helping out fellow writers.

Thanks, you too! :3

Hey thank you so much for the comment! :) I will describe the other characters later on, they all have history and meaning behind them. And I will do some research on some of the characters with whom's issues I'm not familiar, but I'm determined to use everything I know in this story from eating disorders to abusive families. Hoping to break some stereotypes, you know? :)

Thanks for the comment on Camp Opalescent. I've written several more chapters, and I'm editing them for Mibba as we speak, and I can promise you the characters develop more. It's weird, the way I am, I like to develop my characters and show their appearance through dialogue. Probably a bad strategy, but I like it. For some reason or another, I don't like to give too much away in the first chapter. That'll probably hurt me more than help me, but oh well!

I do have to disagree with one thing though, I did specify on what color Katy's hair was, at the beginning of the first chapter. :PP

Thanks for the comment, though, I really appreciate it, and when I'm doing my final edits after I'm done writing, I'll definitely add in some more imagery!

Thank you very much for your comment on Maudlin Melody! After reading through it, I realised that what you said about the dialogue was very true. I'll try to make it smoother if I can ^^

I'm glad you feel that way! I really, really appreciated your comment :'3

Thank you! But can you just explain how is it not a sentence, I'm sort of confused, lol. And I'm going to correct it, I should do it right.

thanks for the comment on east avenue! i appreciate you admiring it's simplicity, and for the honesty in needing to work on first person narrative.

thank you.
i'm morgan.

Heyyy! I'm Beth, thanks for the welcome. =)